Som jeg gjør hvert år så starter jeg en fanfiction nå som det er sommer.
Dette var alt det jeg gadd.
Episode 1
- Trapped in the past -
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Orket ikke å finne på flashback, men jeg er litt fornøyd hittil
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The first thing we see is an eye to a man with ginger hair. He's listening to
Erike Eigen - I want to marry a lighthouse keeper. Then we see the ocean and realizes that he is on a freighter.
A Man is running to him and shouting:
"Ron, Ron?"
Ron turns around. A white man with brown hair and glasses is running with a satellite phone in his hand. They both wear a blue jumpsuit.
Ron:
"What is it Riley"
Riley:
"You're not gonna believe this, Ron?"
Ron:
"What is it?"
Riley:
"I got a call from an island nearby. They were survivors from a plane and they found Naomi!"
Ron:
"They did! So there's hope after all"
Riley:
"Yes. But the coordinates are +4 8' 15", +162 3' 42, and that's in the middle of the ocean
Ron:
"I believe what this is. Come with me."
They both run with backpacks and guns to the helicopter. They leave very quickly. Ron is steering the helicopter. We see the helicopter leave and stops. We can only see ocean all the way to the horizon.
Ron:
"Riley.."
Riley:
"What now?"
Ron:
"This is it. We are here."
Riley:
"But it's nothing here. Only ocean"
Ron:
"That's odd. This is the actual position"
Suddenly they are dragged by something very powerful. It looks like they are going through a hole. We hear the instruments spinning and the wind is blowing extremely around them like they were in the middle of a tornado. The pressure is high, the helicopter is going in a loop, it looks lika blizzard. But suddenly it stops and they are right above a big island. They land surprisingly safely and looks at eachother.
Riley:
"What the hell was that!"
Ron:
"It looked like a cyclone or a tornado, but the weather was fine. A storm does not start like that. Could it be supernatural. Could it be a - a force that pulled us down here."
Riley:
"I don't know what that was. Do you think you can start the helicopter again?"
Ron:
"Yes. Everything works. But were are the survivors. They should have been here"
Riley goes out and stands near the helicopter.
Riley:
"Wait. I saw something in the jungle there."
Ron:
"Just wait. I'm coming now"
Suddenly a spear goes right through Riley's body when he is standing outside the helicopter. Blood gushes out of his moutha and he falls bak into the helicopter.
Ron:
"Riley!"
For everybody's shock a group of halfnaked polynesian people with rings in ears and nose show up from the jungle. Some of them have torches and some have masks with a lot of feather. A group of maybe 70 people. They have painted themselves in the face and looks like the people from 'King Kong' or 'Apocalypto'. They scream and are standing in shock.
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The camera is on one of the polynesians.
Polynesian man #1: (understandable language)
- Subtitled -
"What is that thing standing there."
Polynesian man #2
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"In the power of 'Aho'eitu. Go back to the abysss prepared for you! Go away!"
Polynesian man reacts on what he was saying.
Polynesian man #1
- Subtitled -
"We do not know what it is. It could be a god. A messenger"
But, all of them look angry and many of them have spears in their hands, ready to do something. They run towards the helicopter. Ron drags Riley's body inside and frantically tries to start the helicopter. They are getting closer and closer. The helicopter starts, but some of them are holding on to the helicopter. The helicopter lifts up and they are attached to the helicopter. They are looking at Ron who tries to get them off. Ron is disgusted by their faces with yellow teeths, rings, tatoos and all the other things they have put on their faces.
Ron:
"Get off. Get off!"
The helicopter is up high. The people can't hold on anymore and falls off. He then gets dragged by the same force that took him inside this place. But this time it's a little different. Ron is feeling sick while the helicopter is dragged up and away from the island. Then the force drags him down and he lands safely on the sand.
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Lost
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Back at the radio tower.
Jack and Kate are behind the tower.
Jack:
"John! Get back"
Kate:
"What are you doing?"
Jack:
"He killed Naomi. What do you think I'm going to do!"
Suddenly Vincent appears from behind and runs into the jungle.
Jack:
"Vincent!"
Kate and Jack runs after him, but stops. In the middle of the jungle there is a 25 feet tall monument looking like a big ancient table with a mural on it. There is a picture of a group of people. The people had spears in their hands and was looking at something standing white standing on the grass. There were a lot of inscriptions in a language they could not understand.
Kate:
"What is it"
Danielle:
"It's the old civilization"
They turn and see Danielle behind them.
Danielle:
"My team noticed this monument when we were trying to find the source of the radio signal. If you see the mountains drawn on the monument you will see that they are the same mountains depicted in this area"
They are looking up where the radio tower is and it looks exactly the same. The people standing in the mural is standing in the open field where the radio tower is.
Kate:
"Sayid mentioned a four-toed statue. Maybe they are the people that build it."
Danielle:
"Yes, we saw it too. They may be the people who build the rope-bridges and drawn a lot of other murals on the island. They have even build a big temple. When we got here a month after our crash was the white thing in the middle of the picture that caught our attention."
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Kate:
"it looks like the people on the picture are very angry and looks directly the white thing"
Danielle:
"Yes, but doesn't it have a striking resemblance to a helicopter"
Jack:
"Well that is not possible"
Danielle:
"You've told me that a woman can't get pregnant here, but this looks like an old community that have lived on the island for ages. So what exactly is possible here, Jack"
They both look at the mural. The audience know that the picture is depicting the situation on the open field with Ron and Riley.
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Desmond is swimming up to the surface in scuba diver suit and sees a white helicopter on the beach. Someone is there and burying something or someone (the audience knows it is Riley's dead body).
Desmond swims to the beach and Ron points one of his guns at him. Des goes up from the water with his hands up.
Ron:
"Are you him?"
Desmond:
"What?"
Ron:
"Is your name Jack Shephard?"
Desmond:
"No, my name is Desmond David Hume"
Ron mumbles Desmond like he has heard the name before.
Ron:
"Do I know you?"
Desmond:
"I don't think so. Who are you and who are you burying?"
Ron had completely forgotten about Riley. His head was covered with a bag so Desmond did not see his face. He lowered the gun.
Ron:
"My name is Ron and this was my friend Riley. He got a heart attack on the helicopter while we were heading here"
Desmond:
"I'm sorry 'bout that. Are you from the freighter?"
Ron:
"Yes. I am from the DHARMA Initiative Hanso Group. We have a periodic inspection here"
Desmond:
"I believe Kelvin have told me about that."
Ron:
"Kelvin?"
Desmond:
"My friend from a DHARMA station here. But he's dead, just like your friend"
Ron:
"I'm sorry. Will you help me with this. I think there is an extra shovel in the copter."
Des took of the scuba diver equipment and went in. He noticed all the guns back in the copter.
Desmond (shouting from inside the copter):
"What's up with the guns, brother"
Ron (from outside):
"Safety issues. Don't worry. We don't use them that often."
Des noticed a gun with some blood on it and got suspicious. Did Ron kill Riley. Des picks it up, but get knocked out from behind.
He ties him to a tree on the beach, it's getting dark and he picks up a satellite phone and says:
Ron:
"are you there Paul?"
Paul ( on the other line)
"Yeah, what is it"
Ron:
"You will not believe who I have here"
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Everybody sits near the radio tower. It's dark and people are tired. Some people are sleeping next to the tower and some people are sitting next to a campfire they've made.
Claire goes to Jack with Aaron
Claire:
"Jack?"
Jack:
"Yes, is everything allright?"
Claire:
"Shouldn't they be here now?"
Jack:
"Well, they're probably trying to find out the coordinates, getting a rescue team, preparing a helicopter. Don't worry they will be here soon"
Claire:
"Because we are all very tired and need some place to stay before they come"
Alex comes in and interupts:
"We can stay at the barracks"
Jack:
"What?"
Alex:
"The tired people. They can stay at the barracks, our village, because it's abandoned. I know the code for the sonic fence, so it's not going to be that hard. The helicopters can land safely there and pick us up."
Jack:
"No. I'm not letting you go out in the jungle in the dark."
Alex:
"But it's safe. Our people are heading to the Temple and the Cerberus system is..."
A loud sound, something like the Lockdown-sound, is heard out from a speaker on the radio tower. Everybody reacts and looks at the speaker. A male voice is heard.
Male voice:
"This is a message from the DHARMA Initiative Hanso Group to all members left of the DHARMA Initiative. We have discovered that some stations are destroyed and we are going to have an inspection here, but first, all members proceed to a safe station and lock all doors. The hostiles on the island have ruined our experiments. For those who are unaware about this, in December 1987 they managed to kill several DHARMA Initiative members who stayed in the barracks. We were unaware that there were DHARMA Initiative members left and proceeded their experiments. Don't worry, your replacements will come now. We thank you for your very long job here and we are sorry for not contacting. But this is important. Every member has to either stay at the barracks or stay at your post. Do not let the hostiles come inside. In approximately two hours we will turn on the Cerberus system that will destroy every single human life on the island. Every single hostile will be killed and every DHARMA Initiative member will get a replacement. I repeat: Every member has to either stay at the barracks or stay at their post. In approximately two hours we will turn on the Cerberus system that will destroy every single human life on the island.
This message is repeated but we see Jack looking at Alex.
Jack:
"The Cerberus system. That is the black smoke right?"
Alex:
"Yes. I can take your people to the barracks in just one and a half hour."
Jack:
"What about the fence. You have the code"
Alex:
"Yes. We're gonna make it through. The village is safe"
Jack turns and sees the scared faces to the whole camp.
Jack
"Listen everybody. The thing in the jungle everybody calls the monster is back. Alex will take all of you to the village they stayed at. It's abandoned and it is safe. You all have to listen to her because it is a dangerous sonic fence she has to turn off. The Cerberus system will be turned on in two hours so you have to move fast."
Sun:
"What about the rescue?"
Jack:
"Since the male voice said we could stay at our stations, I'm going to stay here, inside the radio tower. I will hear if the helicopter shows up."
Kate:
"What about the ones on the beach. They don't know about this"
Jack gets the walkie-talkie he attached to his belt.
Jack:
"Hurley. Are you there"
We see the people on the beach around a fire and having a good time.
Hurley:
"Yes, I'm here Jack"
Jack:
"You all have to go to the nearest DHARMA station and hide inside there. The DHARMA Initiative are going to get the monster, the security system, to kill everybody outside a station. You got that?"
Hurley looks at Sayid and the rest and wonders.
Hurley:
"Are you serious?"
Jack:
"Hurley. We all heard it on a speker here on the radio tower. You have to get everybody in to the nearest station. In two hours the monster will kill everyone. This is very important. Okay."
Hurley turns it off and looks at Sayid.
Sayid:
"What is it?"
Hurley:
"We have a problem"
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Ron made a campfire near the cable. Desmond is awake and realizes he is tied up.
Desmond:
"What are you doing to me?"
Ron:
"I'm following an order. You probably know about orders don't you?"
Desmond:
"You're Naomi's people. She had a picture of me and my girlfriend. How do you know about us?"
Ron:
"We know about you through the person who are giving these orders"
Desmond:
"It's her father right! Charles Widmore?"
Ron:
"He is involved, but it's not Mr. Widmore who are giving the orders."
Desmond:
"Who is is then?"
Ron:
"I'm not allowed to say that."
Desmond:
"Can't ya give me some answers damnit! Why are you doing this to me..."
Ron:
"I want answers from you!"
Desmond:
"What! What do you wanna know. In three years I've been stranded here and pushing a button. What more do you wanna know."
Ron:
"Everything. How was it that you crashed here. And tell me about your friend Kelvin. i wanna know everything about your relationship with The DHARMA Initiative"
Desmond:
"I was never a member aight! Tell me the truth. Are you DHARMA?"
Ron:
"Yes, I am. But that doesn't matter now."
Ron stands up.
Desmond:
"Where are you going, brother?"
Ron:
"I'm taking you to the helicopter and we are moving to the man with Naomi's satellite phone"
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The beach people are arguing about their next move
Sayid:
"You said we only have two hours?"
Hurley:
"Yes, but what about Desmond and Charlie. They have been there too long"
Sawyer:
"what are we gonna do? Stay here and wait for'em"
Sayid:
"We can't go after them. It's too far to the cable."
Jin:
"We use van"
Hurley:
"Yes, I can take the van and drive to the cable! That's much faster"
Sawyer:
"Unless you've forgot. Their station is underwater so your DHARMA-mobile won't help ya"
Hurley:
"Well, we can't leave them to die"
Sayid:
"They may be dead already"
Hurley:
"Don't say that."
Sayid:
"I'm sorry Hurley, but we can't risk it. We have to move to The Pearl now."
Bernard stands up.
Bernard:
"Well, if the Pearl isn't that far, let's just wait here for an hour or more and then take the van to the Pearl."
Sayid:
"Good idea. It's going to be 15 minutes drive to the Pearl. We wait here, but Hurley..."
He looks at Hurley
Sayid:
"We leave if they don't show up"
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Inside the radio tower is Jack sitting alone with Ben tied up. Nobody is outside. Everybody has left.
Ben:
"Jack. I don't understand why you are still holding on to me. I thought you would kill me."
Jack:
"You said you were born on this island"
Ben:
"Yes"
Jack:
"Well, I don't understand this pregnancy thing you guys have been going on with. How could a civilization, men and women, be living in peace right on this island if a pregnant woman can't have birth"
Ben:
"It's complicated, Jack. Only the ones that conceive the baby on the island die, not the people who come to the island as pregnant. How do you know about the civilization?"
Jack:
"Can't you tell me a little about that?"
Ben:
"The old civilization holds greater power than you can imagine. You can't see it because you are not on the list"
Jack:
"What list?"
Ben:
"Jacob's list."
Jack:
"Ah, the great leader nobody has seen right? You told me about Jacob after I finished your surgery. You told me that you are the only one who listens to Jacob"
Ben:
"That is the truth! The list contains the people who are ready. Ready to communicate with the island. This island contains a powerful force"
Jack:
"I don't believe you. I don't think there is a Jacob. I believe every unusual thing here is created by the DHARMA Initiative. I don't think there is a magic force behind this"
Ben:
"That is what I'm saying to you. You are not ready. The civilization contains an enourmous force. They are the island's history"
walkie talkie:
"Jack, are you there"
Jack goes out of the radio tower to get a better signal.
Jack:
"Sayid?"
Sayid:
"Jack. We are soon heading to the Pearl, but we have a problem. Desmond and Charlie are not back yet"
Jack:
"What?"
Sayid:
"I believe something has happened to them. We will drive to the Pearl with the DHARMA-van, but I'm going after them"
Jack:
"Sayid, We can't risk it"
But something happens. We can't hear Sayid anymore. The camera pans at Sayid. He's looking at the ocean. The others are looking there too.
Sayid: (to Jack)
"Someone is coming with a helicopter. Just have the walkie on. I'll talk to you later"
Hurley:
"Is it the rescue?"
Sayid:
"Possibly. But prepare yourself. Grab the guns and don't do anything stupid"
The helicopter lands safely on the sand. An african-american man gets out. He wears a DHARMA-jumpsuit and look surprised.
The afro-american man:
"Didn't you hear the message. You should be inside a station right now."
Sayid has a gun pointed at him but lowers it.
Sayid:
"We were going to right now."
Jack interupts on the walkie.
Jack
"Sayid. A helicopter is landing here on the field."
Sayid:
"I know Jack. A helicopter has landed here too"
The camera is back at Jack. He is standing right outside the tower. A Man goes out of the helicopter and yells.
Ron:
"Don't worry. Everything is fine"
He turns of the helicopter and walk safely to Jack. The camera is at Desmond who is tied up back in the helicopter and tries to get himself loose with the things he finds in there.
Jack:
"It's OK. I think he is one of the people who landed on the beach"
Sayid:
"Ok. I think they've sent more helicopter to the inspection"
The afro-american man hears this and starts to wonder what he is talking about.
Afro-american man:
"Excuse me
Sayid:
"What is it?"
Afro-american man:
"I heard you say something about more helicopters."
Sayid:
"Yes. One of our friends have spotted one too"
Sayid is getting suspicious and grabs the gun again.
Afro-american man:
"No no. You don't need the gun, but the thing is that we haven't send anymore helicopters. The rest of the DHARMA-crew will come here in an hour with boats"
Sayid:
"Boats?"
Afro-american man:
"Yes. We haven't send anymore helicopters"
Sayid frantically goes back to the walkie-talkie.
Sayid:
"Jack! Listen. Get inside the tower. I don't think you should trust the people in the helicopter."
Jack (on the other line):
"Nothing to worry about. "
But then the camera goes to Jack. He is being held by gunpoint by Ron. Jack looks scared and is forced to say things to Sayid.
Ron:
"Now say that you have taken care of it."
Jack:
"I've taken care of it, Sayid"
Ron:
"Good. Now turn of the walkie"
Surprisingly we hear Desmond say:
"Not that fast!"
Ron:
"How did you get out?"
Desmond has found a gun and is holding it to his face.
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Lost
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Det var det jeg orket for i denne sommeren.
