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Lost Fanfiction - Skriv din egen episode/tekst
Siden det ikke er så stor fremgang i RPG trådene og de andre fanfiction-konkuranse trådene, oppretter jeg derfor en helt vanlig, ikke-konkuranse fanfiction tråd hvor alle kan være med å skrive tekster og episoder angående Lost. Teksten kan være en slags novelle, eller novelleform, eller et manuskript.
LOST - "Out to See"
Locke: "We need to expand Jack... We have stayed here all these days, just because you wanted us to, now it's time we explore the island"
Jack: "It's to dangerous John".
Locke: "More dangerous than to stay here and being taken one by one?"
Jack: "John... Listen to yourself, if you want to explore, fine, but you stand alone".
(Locke - Flashback. John sits in a park in his wheelchair feeding the birds and a woman sits down next to him)
Woman: "Beautiful weather, isn't it?"
Locke: "Oh yes..."
(Silence)
Woman: "I'm Martha..."
Locke: "Hm?"
Woman: "My name is Martha..."
Locke: "John. I am John Locke".
Martha: "Like the philosopher?"
Locke: "Yes. Like the philosopher".
(Silence)
Martha: "I like being in the park, don't you?"
Locke: "Yes ma'am, I like being in the park".
Martha: "Why are you here?"
Locke: "Why I am in the park?"
Martha: "Yes. Any specific reason?"
Locke: "Not really, but I did quit my job today..."
Martha: "That's reason enough for me..."
Locke: "I'm probably a bad person".
Martha: "It was probably a bad job..."
Locke: "A boxcompany..."
Martha: "I was right..."
Locke: "Hehe..."
(Flashback over. Eko and Sawyer in the jungle)
Sawyer: "What are we doing here anyway?"
Eko: "Searching..."
Sawyer: "Searching for what!?"
(Silence)
Sawyer: "Yeah, I was talking to you!"
Eko: "I heard you... You don't need to shout".
Sawyer: "So what the hell are we searching for, Shaft?"
(Silence)
Sawyer: "Oh sorry, I used the H-word. My bad, hoss..."
Eko: "It's fine with me. I don't judge you. God does".
Sawyer: "God? Well great, I am sorry God, I did not mean to insult your holy heaven!"
Eko: "Now you're being rude, and I don't like rude people..."
Sawyer: "Forget it. I'm goin' back..."
Eko: "Wait!"
Sawyer: "What now?
Eko: "Look!"
Sawyer: (Noticing a body laying on the ground) "Damn..."
(At the beach)
Locke: "Michael!"
Michael: "Yeah, man?"
Locke: "Heard about your encounter with the computer..."
Michael: "Yeah..."
Locke: "I was thinking of exploring the island and I tought you where interested...?"
Michael: "Yes, have you told Jack about it, does he come - "
Locke: "No. Jack doesn't come..."
Michael: "Why not, didn't he want to find Walt?"
Locke: "I don't know -
Jack: (Enters) Yes I want to find Walt..."
Locke: "You do, but you don't want to -
Jack: "I wasn't speaking to you, John. When I speak to you, you'll know it because I'll look at you..."
(Silence)
Locke: "I'll be in the hatch..."
(Locke - Flashback. The same park.)
Locke: "And then I said; You can't live in a cake unless you are a gelebutton..."
(Laughing)
Martha: "Haha... Good one".
Locke: "You're probably the only one who thought that".
Martha: "Well, I thought it was really funny..."
Locke: "You have any kids, ma'am?"
Martha: "No... I'm afraid I don't. What about you?"
Locke: "No".
(Silence)
Martha: "I use to be married, but my husband left me..."
Locke: "Why?"
Martha: "I guess he got tired of me..."
Locke: "Don't say that, no one can get tired of you..."
Martha: "I guess he got tired of helping me with everything".
Locke: "What do you mean, ma'am?"
Martha: "I am blind, mister Locke".
(Locke notices her sunglasses)
Martha: "You didn't notice?"
Locke: "Eh... No".
Martha: "Sorry for bothering you..."
Locke: "No. I understand you. They pretend we're not there".
(Locke layes Martha's hand on his wheelchair)
Martha: "Oh..."
Locke: "Nice to have someone to talk to..."
Martha: "Yes".
(Silence)
Martha: "Even with my eyes wide open, I can't see a thing..."
Locke: "But sometimes people see more with their eyes closed".
(Flashback over. At the hatch)
Locke: (Enters) "Hello..."
Kate: "Hi John... Look who's here!"
Locke: "Excuse me?"
Desmond: (Enters) "Hello boxman..."
Locke: "Desmond...? You're back...?"
Desmond: "That's right, brother..."
LOST
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Altså, fanfictions er vel mer når man skriver en sammenhengende historie - ikke noen form for manuskript. Det er i alle fall det inntrykket jeg har - trodde at det skulle være mer subplots/episoder på novelleform eller noe deromkring. Slik som det foregikk i denne konkurransen som det aldri ble noe av ( link).
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Jeg vet at det ikke er slik som Pep sa at man skulle lage de, men jeg hadde allerede begynt på den, så here it comes:
Fan fiction 1
Episode 1,
Previously on LOST:
The heroin plane crashed.
Boone: What is a Nigerian priest doing on an island in the South Pacific?
-don’t mistake mistake coincidence for fate.
LOST
Hurley: Hey dude! Jack! What is going on in the hatch now? Everybody is coming in and out there all the time. ..
Jack: I don’t now. It was Michael who was pushing the button last.
Hurley: …and entering the magic numbers?
Jack: Yeah. “The Magic Numbers”.
Flashback:
Eko: [in phone] Alright, I’ll see what I can do. Yeah I understand. It is not legal, I know.
Person: Priest?
Eko: Yeah, that’s me.
Person: I have to talk to you. All I say, stays between us to right?
Eko: Yes, of course.
Person: Someone I know is smuggling heroin. They are using statues of Maria and put the drugs inside. I don’t know what to do. Should I call the police? I’ve already tried to make them understand that what they are doing is illegal.
Eko: aha, I understand. Where to they live? Abuja?
Person: Yes, how did you know?
Eko: I think I know these people. I am related to them.
flashback over]
Hurley: Your name is Eko right?
Eko: Yes.
Hurley: You don’t have any other names? Like Hugo Eko or John Eko?
Eko: No, just Eko.
Hurley: All right, I can live with that. I am Hurley by the way.
Eko: Just Hurley? No other names?
Hurley: Well, all right dude. It’s Hugo Reyes. Hurley is a nickname.
Flashback:
Eko is walking towards a beech craft on a airport in Nigeria.
Eko: Are you sure you want to do this?
Person2: Yes, we need the money. Not everybody can get good jobs like you. You’re a priest. We are.. we are…heroin smugglers… It’s a lot of money in it.
Eko: All right, if you really sure you want do this I can’t make you don’t. And as my brother, I will not call the police either.
Person2: Thanks brother. You know, you can always join us.
flashback over]
Eko and John Locke is standing over Boones grave.
Eko: How did he die?
Locke: I and he, was walking in the jungle and we came over a beech craft. My leg was hurt, so he tried to get in. Then the plane felled down and he was really injured. I managed to carry him to the doctor, Jack. But it was to late.
Eko: Beech Craft? Can you show me it?
Flashback:
Eko’ s cell phone is ringing.
Eko: hello?
Phone-guy: Hello, I am one of your brothers friends. I am very sorry to say that the plane he and two other persons was driving with, probably crashed in the pacific ocean.
Eko: I knew he shouldn’t do this. Damn. I’ll have to pray. Good bye and thanks for letting me know.
flashback over]
Locke and Eko has arrived the heroin plane.
Locke: Here it is. After looking at they’re clothes they have probably been here 2- 10 years.
Eko: My brother..
Locke: What did you say?
Eko: My brother. Heroin smuggler. He was on a plane like this.
LOST
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Fisker skrev 18 Dec, 2005 19:37:32:
Jeg vet at det ikke er slik som Pep sa at man skulle lage de, men jeg hadde allerede begynt på den, så here it comes:
Det er vel ikke noen fasit på det, det er bare sånn jeg har fått inntrykk av det. Og jeg så at de fleste innleggene i konkurransetråden var sånn, så det styket jo det jeg trodde. Som sagt - det finnes vel ingen fasit.
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LOST
Previously on Lost:
(In the hatch)
Locke: "Desmond...? You're back...?"
Desmond: "That's right, brother..."
(In the jungle)
Locke: Here it is. After looking at they’re clothes they have probably been here 2- 10 years.
Eko: My brother..
Locke: What did you say?
Eko: My brother. Heroin smuggler. He was on a plane like this.
LOST
(At the beach)
Charlie: (Playing on his guitar) “Hey Hurley, listen to this...”
Hurley: “Not right now, dude...”
Charlie: “Why not? You hate me?”
Hurley: “Woah?”
Charlie: “I bloody knew it. You hate me!”
Hurley: “Dude. I don’t hate you”.
Charlie: “But you don’t like me neither?”
Hurley: “Okay, let me hear your song...”
Charlie: “No”.
Hurley: “Dude...”
Charlie: “Go on your adventures Hurley. You’re Colombus. You’re the man...”
(Charlie walks away)
Hurley: “Dude, what’s up with him?”
Claire: “What?”
Hurley: “Charlie. Something wrong?”
Claire: “No... He is like that... I don’t know, he have changed....”
Hurley: “Oh...”
Claire: “Wanna hold Aaron?”
Hurley: “Dude. When I was like eight, I had this cat called Aaron”.
Claire: “Heh...”
Hurley: “Yeah! But one day he died”.
Claire: “Thanks Hurley, you’re really helpin’...”
Hurley: “Oh, no. I didn’t mean to – “
Claire: “It’s okay”.
Hurley: “Good. Cause... This is not a cat, right? And it was the cat who – “
Claire: “I get it Hurley...”
(In the jungle)
Locke: “Your brother was on a plane like this?”
Eko: “Yes”.
Locke: “He’s lost?”
Eko: “Yes”.
Locke: “Well, me and Boone found this up there, but it fell down”.
Eko: “Did you find something else?”
Locke: “Yes. Infact I did”.
(In the hatch)
Kate: “So you came back, huh?”
Desmond: “Yeah... You fixed the computer?”
Kate: “Sayid did...”
Desmond: “Where’s the rest?”
Kate: “At the beach... Some are at the caves”.
Desmond: “The caves?”
Kate: “Yeah. We found some caves”.
Sawyer: (Enters) What the – “
(Sawyer stears at Desmond)
Kate: “It’s allright, Sawyer”.
Sawyer: “Who the hell is that?”
Kate: “Sawyer... This is Desmond”.
Sawyer: “Desmond?”
Kate: “Yes”.
Sawyer: (Whispering to Kate) “You wanna tell me what’s going on here, princess?”
Kate: “He lived down here...”.
Sawyer: “Down here?”
Kate: “Yes”.
(In the jungle)
Locke: “Here it is...”
Eko: “Where?”
Locke: (Shows Eko the corpse in the tree).
(Silence)
Locke: “Well?”
Eko: “That’s not him...”
Locke: “He have been here for a long time, the face is – “
Eko: “It’s not him”.
Locke: “Sure?”
Eko: “Yes”.
Locke: “He had a gun on him”.
Eko: “I know”.
Locke: “So your brother is still here, somewhere?”
Eko: “Maybe”.
Locke: “Well...”.
Eko: “I need to find him”.
(In the hatch)
[The orientation film:
“From the moment the alarm sounds, you will have four minutes to enter the code into the microcomputer process... --duction into the program. When the alarm sounds, either you or your partner must input the code. It is highly recommended that you and your partner take alternating shifts. In this manner, you will both stay as fresh and alert... most important that, when the alarm sounds, the code be entered correctly and in a timely fashion. Do not attempt to use the computer for anything thing else other than the entering of the code. This is it’s only function...
Congratulations. Until your replacements arrive, the future of the project is in your hands. On behalf of the Degroots, Alvar Hanso and all of us at the Dharma Initiative, thank you, namaste and good luck.”
Sawyer: “What the hell was that all about?”
Desmond: “What have you done to the film?”
Kate: “What?”
Desmond: “The film. What have you done to it?”
Kate: “Done to it?”
Desmond: “Yes?”
Kate: “I don’t know, you can ask Locke, I haven’t done anythi – “
Desmond: “Where is he?!”
Kate: “Locke? He’s at the beach I think... I don’t know”.
(Desmond leaves. Meanwhile, in the jungle)
Locke: “I can help you find your brother...”
Eko: “Will you?”
Locke: “Of course...”
Eko: “I can do it myself...”
Locke: “No no. I go with you”.
Eko: (Looking into the jungle) “Have you any idea what’s out there?”
Locke: “Yes...”
LOST
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LOST
Previously on Lost:
[In the hatch]
Desmond: “What have you done to the film?”
Kate: “What?”
Kate: “I don’t know, you can ask Locke, I haven’t done anythi – “
Desmond: “Where is he?!”
Kate: “Locke? He’s at the beach I think... I don’t know”.
[In the jungle]
Locke: “So your brother is still here, somewhere?”
Eko: “I need to find him”.
LOST
[At the beach]
Desmond: [Running] “Locke?”
Hurley: “Dude, who are you?”
Desmond: “Where’s the boxman?”
Hurley: “Who?”
Desmond: “The boxman, brother?”
Hurley: “Dude. I don’t know who you’re talkin’ about...”
Jack: [Enters] “Desmond...?”
Desmond: “Where’s the other one?”
Jack: “Who?”
Desmond: “Locke...?”
[Eko and Locke enters]
Desmond: “Brother!”
Locke: “Hello...”
Desmond: “What have ye done to the film?”
Locke: “The orientation film? We found the missing pieces, Desmond...”
Desmond: “Where?”
Eko: “Who is this man?”
Locke: “What happened to the film, Desmond?”
Desmond: “Come on. Follow me”.
Jack: “What’s going on Desmond?”
[Jack flashback]
Jack: [In hospital] ”What’s the situation?”
Dr. Yale: “Male. Late 40’s. Carcrash... Broken vertebral column”.
Jack: ”Okay, let’s do this…”
Dr. Yale: “What about dr. Shepard, sir?”
Jack: “I am dr. Shepard...”
Dr. Yale: “Your father, Jack?”
Jack: “Come on. No time to argue”.
[Later]
Dr. Yale: “What was that all about, Jack?”
Jack: “What do you mean...?”
Dr. Yale: “You don’t have a good father and son relationship, huh?”
Jack: “No. We don’t”.
Dr. Yale: “Well... Gotta go. See you later. And Jack...?”
Jack: “Yeah?”
Dr. Yale: “Try to get some sleep. You look like a zombie”.
[Flashback over.
In the hatch]
Kate: “You’re allright, Sawyer?”
Sawyer: “Yeah... I’m fine”.
Kate: “You where shot you know”.
Sawyer: “Yes, I know that princess, and when I’ll get th guy who shot me, I’m gonna kill him...”
Jack: [Enters] “...So what is it Desmond?”
Desmond: “Allright. Before I got here... Kelvin and Wallace where here...”
Kate: “What’s going on?”
Locke: “We found some missing pieces of the orientation film... Eko found them actually”.
Kate: “Missing pieces?”
Locke: “Yes...”
Desmond: “Kelvin and Wallace startet arguing...”
Jack: “Wallace?”
Desmond: “Yeah... Wallace ran away, why he destroyed the film I don’t know...”
Locke: “And he ran away to another station?”
Desmond: “I don’t know, brother. I didn’t get out much”.
[Alarm]
Locke: [Looking at Desmond] “...I’ll do it”.
Jack: “How long are you going to do this, John?”
Desmond: “Ye don’t believe something will happen?”
Jack: “No. I don’t”.
Locke: “That’s your problem Jack...”
Jack: “Problem?”
Locke: “You say you’re a man of science. You don’t have patience. You don’t believe in destiny or faith. You don’t believe in anything”.
Jack: “This is nothing to believe John. It’s a button. And a computer... Give it a break, John”.
Locke: “I wonder how your father was like...”
[Jack Flashback]
Christian Shepard: “I didn’t show up today...”
Jack: “I know...”
Christian: “I’m sorry son...”
Jack: “I certainly hope so...”
Christian: “Allright, so I drink a little...”
Jack: “You drink every day dad...”
Christian: “Jack, Jack, Jack... I’m sorry”.
Jack: “We had a patient today with a broken vertebral column...”
Chirstian: “...Yes?”
Jack: “I needed you there...”
Christian: “So he died?”
Jack: [Leaving] “No. But he could have, just because of you dad...”.
[Flashback over. Outside the hatch]
Eko: “I gotta find my brother”.
Locke: “I’ll go with you, if you don’t mind...”
Eko: “I have to do this alone... I’m sorry”.
Locke: “Well. If you say so... Be careful then...”
Eko: [Leaving] “I have God with me”.
Jack: “Locke, where’s Eko?”
Locke: “He had something he had to do...”
Jack: “So where is he? He went into the jungle alone?!”
Locke: “He’s not a dog Jack”.
Jack: “We don’t know what’s out there, and you heard Rousseau – “
Locke: “You don’t...”
Jack: “Excuse me?”
Locke: “You don’t know what’s out there”.
Jack: “...And you do?”
[Silence]
Locke: “I’m going back to the beach...”
Jack: “You do that John...”
LOST
Redigert av darwin 23 Dec, 2005 15:43:44
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Previously on Lost:
Desmond: “What have ye done to the film?”
Eko: [Leaving] “I have God with me”.
LOST
[Jack enters the Hatch]
Michael: Jack! Have you seen that Nigerian guy?
Jack: Locke told me he was going out to the jungel.
Kate: What? Why? Does he know about the monster and all that stuff?
Jack: I don’t know. Ask John.
Hurley: Wow, dude. He just killing himself out there.
Flashback: Sawyer
Sawyer: I killed a innocent person.
Friend of sawyer: What?
Sawyer: I thougt it was Sawyer.
Friend: What? Sawyer? What is this James?
Sawer: You know, the person he got my parents killed…
Friend: Did you kill him?
Sawyer: No, it was not him. I killed an innocent person.
Flashback over
[in the hatch]
Hurley: Are’nt we gonna help he.. Keiko or whats his name was..?
Jack: He would’nt helped us.
Michael: That’s wrong. He carried Sawyer back to our camp.
Sawyer: He did`?
Jin: ababababa [Jeg kan ikke koreansk]
Michael: Yeah, we are gonna help him.
Jack: You are?
Sawyer: Yes, we are.
Jack: No, Sawyer, you can’t og anywhere now. Stay in the hatch.
Sawyer: I have to help him.
Flashback: Sawyer
Friend: Are you gonna go to the police?
Sawyer: And join Oz? Hell no.
Friend: Do what you feel is right.
Sawyer: I will.
Flashback over
[outside the hatch]
Michael: We must find John first.
Sawyer: Yeah, but wheres he?
Jin: abababab.
[Sawyer, Michael and Jin come to the Beach]
Michael to Rose: Have you seen Locke?
Sawyer: you know, the crazy bold guy with all the freaking knifes?
Rose: I think he is with Charlie. Maybe they’re talking religion.
Sawyer: Wow, the popstar is religious?
Rose: They had a statue of virgin Maria.
Sawyer: I’ve seen it all. What’s the next? Cop eating a donout?
Jin: Ababababa
Sawyer: Yeah, it’s a old joke.
[Michael, Jin and Sawyer found Locke]
Michael: You don’t know where Eko is do you?
Locke: He is somewhere in the jungle..
Michael: Where in the jungle?
Locke pointes out somewhere in the jungle.
Jin, Sawyer and Locke has walked in thee jungle for a while.
Eko comes out, bloody.
Sawyer: What happened?
LOST
Redigert av Fisker 24 Dec, 2005 13:24:30
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LOST
Previously on Lost:
[In the hatch]
Locke: “You say you’re a man of science. You don’t have patience. You don’t believe in destiny or faith. You don’t believe in anything”.
Jack: “This is nothing to believe John. It’s a button. And a computer... Give it a break, John”.
[At the beach]
Michael: You don’t know where Eko is do you?
Locke: He is somewhere in the jungle..
Michael: Where in the jungle?
[Eko appears seriously injured infornt of Michael and Sawyer]
Sawyer: What happened?
LOST
[In the hatch]
Kate: ”You take the next shift?”
Jack: “Yeah, sure...”
Kate: “Something wrong, Jack?”
Jack: “No... I’m fine...”
Kate: “Still angry because I kissed you, Jack... I didn’t – “
Jack: “It’s allright Kate!”
Kate: [Leaving] “...Well. I go back to the beach...”
[In the jungle]
Michael: “Eko?”
Eko: “Go back”.
Michael: “Man... What happened?”
Eko: “I said, Go back!”
Jin: [Something korean]
Sawyer: “Hey Shaft, we came here to – “
[They hear the securitysystem behind Eko]
Eko: “Run!”
Michael: “Locke, come on, man!”
Jin: [Something korean]
[Locke stand still looking into the jungle]
Jin: [Something korean]
Locke: ”Just go, or stand still…”
Jin: [Something korean]
[The securitysystem disappears]
Locke: “Come on, let’s go back...”
Jin: “Monsteh?”
Locke: “No...”
Jin: “Monsteh?”
Locke: [Leaving] “No monster Jin... Come on”.
[Jin flashback – Jin and Mr. Paik in a meeting]
Mr. Paik: [Subtitled] “Mr. Nataku, Boss Akamatsu, this is Jin Kwon and Lee Shirou...”
Nataku: [Subtitled] “Your minions, heh?”
Mr. Paik [Subtitled] “Hehe, yes... Kwon is new, Shirou is son of Notisho Kamui...”
Nataku: [Subtitled] “Aaaah... I see. Mr. Kwon, what do you think about us?”
Jin: [Subtitled] “Ah, I think you’re great sir, fantastic...”
Akamatsu: [Subtitled] “Haha, I like him, mr. Paik...”
Nataku:[Answering phone, subtitled] “Yes. Nataku. Hello. Yes...”
Akamatsu: [Subtitled] “So mr. Paik, you are either with us, or against us... You understand?”.
Mr. Paik: [Subtitled] “Yes. I understand... Mr. Kwon?”
Jin: [Subtitled] “Huh?”
Akamatsu: [Subtitled] “Do you understand?”
Jin: [Looking at mr. Paik, subtitled] “Eh... Eh... Well...”
Mr. Paik: [Subtitled] “Mr. Kwon!!”
Jin: [Subtitled] “I’m with you, I’m with you...”
[Flashback over. At the beach.]
Kate: “Hey Sun, have you seen Sawyer?”
Sun: “No. I think he went with Jin and Michael into the jungle...”
Kate: “Okay, thanks... Which way did they go?
Sun: “I don’t know, wait, I’ll go with you...”
[Somewhere else on the beach]
Hurley: “Dude, that’s wrong...”
Charlie: “No!”
Hurley: “Yes... You can’t have potatoes with ice-cream...”
Charlie: “Yes you can!”
Hurley: “What ice-cream then?”
Charlie: “Fresh, good, tasty potato-icecream...”
Hurley: “Fresh potato-icecream, dude, it’s no such thing...”
Charlie: “Yes it is. When I was a kid, I ate it all the time...”
Hurley: “Dude... Heh...”
[In the jungle]
Michael: ”Man, what happened to you?”
Eko: “I don’t know...”
Michael: “You don’t know?”
Eko: “No...”
Jin: [Something korean].
Sawyer: “You’re bleeding...”
Michael: “Come on, let’s bring him back, and Locke, what’s wrong with you?”
Locke: “Wrong with me?”
Michael: “You could have got yourself killed, and you’re the only hunter here Locke...”
Locke: “Yes?”
Michael: “So we need you...”
Sawyer: “Whoa, Mike and Baldy...”
Locke: “It wasn’t going to kill me... You don’t understand yet, but – “
Eko: [Looking curious at Locke] “What do you know?”
Locke: “I think we’re being tested. I think we’re all here for a reason, here on this very island, we all have started new lifes, you know that, we have been changed, more than others, but every single one of us have or will be better persons...”
Eko: “I don’t agree with you... “
Locke: “No?”
Eko: [Leaving] “No...”
[Somewhere else in the jungle]
Kate: "Jin, huh?"
Sun: "Hm?"
Kate: "Jin... and you. He's nice?"
Sun: "Yes..."
Kate: "I wish I had someone like him..."
Sun: "What do you mean?"
Kate: "Someone like Jin. I've seen how much he cares about you..."
Sun: [Smiling] "But you have Sawyer?"
Kate: "I don't know... Saywer is okay..."
Sun: "But?"
Kate: "I don't know... It seems like he's still dealing with his past..."
[Sun - flashback]
Sun: [Subtitled] "Jin, you're home..."
Jin: [Subtitled] "Yes, but I gotta go soon".
Sun: [Subtitled] "You have been away for a week!"
Jin: [Subtitled] "Yes, it's buisness... I do this for us, Sun... I love you".
Sun: [Subtitled] "Then stop this... How could you possible love me, when you run away like this..."
Jin: [Subtitled] "We need the money. Soon, I can buy you everything you want... I promise".
Sun: [Subtitled] "Please... Don't go... Jin..."
Jin: [Subtitled] "I'll be back soon. Your father are taking me with him to Japan, I'll see you soon..."
[Flashback over.
In the hatch].
Desmond: [Enters] "Hi..."
Jack: "Hi..."
[Silence]
Desmond: "Where's the rest?"
Jack: "They're not here right now..."
Desmond: "Why not?"
Jack: "Because... I yelled at'em..."
Desmond: "Why did you do that, brother?"
Jack: "Because... They drive me insane..."
Desmond: "Insane...?"
Jack: "Yeah. Insane..."
Desmond: "So, here ye are, all alone?"
Jack: "Yes..."
Desmond: "I have something for you..."
Jack: "Desmond, not right now... I'm not in the mood for anythi - "
Desmond: [Holding a map] "Oh... But... I think you would like to see it..."
Jack: "Desmond!"
Desmond: [Leaving] "Allright brother... I'll be going... I lay it right here..."
Jack: "Desmond, wait! Sorry... What is it...?"
Desmond: "It's a map over the other stations, and some information about 'em..."
Jack: "There's seven stations?"
Desmond: "No... That one is not a station... It's a controltower, but I warn ye, don't go there brother..."
LOST
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Her kommer en kort historie
in the jungle:
Kate: "Jack, I have to tell you something..."
Jack:"Well, just tell it then."
Kate: "I had a dream about Walt last night... He was standing in front of me, then he turnd around and...and..."
*Kate starts to cry*
Jack:" And what?"
Kate:"Behind him was a body, it was your dead body!"
*Jack is holding around kate*
Jack:" It was just a dream, dont worry. I think you should go back to the hatch and rest."
Kate:"Okey, if you say so..."
At the hatch
Hurly:"Kate, hurry!"
*Kate wakes up*
Kate:"What is it Hurly?"
Hurly:"Jack is gone!"
Ikke akkurat den baste engelsken... 
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The Second Path End
Først vil jeg si noen ord.
Jeg håper dere liker denne historien. Har drevet med den i noen dager og håper at plotet, subplotet og flashbackene stemmer bra og jeg håper dere leser den. Om noen uker vil denne mest sannsynligvis bli latterliggjort i og med at det sikekrt er masse feil her. (Noe som skjedde med mitt forrige Fanfictionbidrag der jeg skrev at Black Rock var en stein, Alex var en mann og masse sånt.
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Episode 9 ½
(Denne episoden er på en måte imellom 9 og 10. )
(Charlie-centric)
(Flashbacks blir skrevet i kursive bokstaver)
Previously on Lost:
Klippet av der Charlie kaster dopet i flammene i The Moth.
Sayid: “The plane was loaded with heroin” og han kaster heroinfiguren foran Charlie og knuser det.
Klippet fra Exodus 3 der vi ser at Charlie har tatt heroinet.
Marvin Candle fra det nye Orientation-klippet: The isolation that attends the duties associated with Station 3 may tempt you to try and utilize the computer for communication with the outside world. This is strictly forbidden. Attempting to use the computer in this manner will compromise the integrity of the project and worse, could lead to another incident.
Michael: This is Michael. Who is this.
>: Dad?
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Denne episoden starter med at vi ser ansiktet på porselensfiguren av Jomfru Maria og Charlie sitter der og ser på den. Han putter den i sekken og går inn i jungelen og forsikrer seg om at ingen ser ham.
Han var sikker på at ingen så ham, så han fortsatte og gå, men plutselig luktet han en spesiell stank.
Han så at det var isbjørnen som ble skutt dagen etter at de kom hit. Den har blitt spist av villsvin og hadde råtnet helt. Men litt av skinnet var igjen. Han holdt skjorta over nesa og gikk videre, men så litt på den. Han la merke til noe. Det var Dharma-merket. ”The Arrow”-merket.
Charlie: ”Dharma?”
Liam: ”So you think we should start a band, right?”
Charlie: “Yeah, It would be cool. You know, I can play guitar, and we could have Joey on drums right.”
Liam: “Do you think it would work?”
Charlie: “Of course it would work!”
Liam: “Maybe we could have a symbol, like people see the symbol, they think: “Ah, It’s them. They’re so great”. You know what I mean,”
Charlie: “Yeah, that could work. What symbol are you talking about?”
Liam: “This symbol. It’s pretty cool. It’s called Ba-gua or something like that.”
[Liam peker på et bilde I en bok der de viser Ba-gua som er temmelig likt Dharma.symbolet.
Charlie står på knærne, med skjorta foran munnen og undersøker Dharma-symbolet. Plutselig hører han noen som kommer. Han står opp og ser hvem det er. Det er Bernard som kommer.
Bernard: ”Hello”
Charlie: ”Hi”
Bernard: “So the smell is coming from that thing,”
[Bernard peker på isbjørnen.]
Charlie: ”Yeah, that’s the polar bear we found, eh I mean shot on the second day on this Island.”
Bernard: “Polar bear? No, that can’t be right. How could a polar bear live in this jungle”
Charlie: “Bingo, but I found this strange symbol on his leg. It says Dharma on it”
Bernard: “What? The Dharma-symbol.”
[Bernard går bort til Charlie og ser på symbolet på isbjørnen”]
Bernard: ”Well that’s a strange thing, because we found this exact symbol in the bunker we found on the other side of the island.
Charlie: “A bunker? You mean, like a hatch, because there is a hatch that Locke…”
Bernard: “No, not a hatch. But it was a room. We found the radio there. It was dirty and not a place where you wanted to be, but we stayed there for a while. Then we found Michael, Jin and Sawyer.”
Charlie: “Ah, and you guys came here.”
Bernard: “That’s right”
Charlie: “Can I ask you a little question?”
Bernard: “Sure,”
Charlie: “Have you ever heard of Driveshaft?”
Bernard: “No”
Charlie: “You know: “You all everybody, you all everybody””
[Bernard reiser seg opp. Det virker som om han ikke er så interessert i det bandet]
Charlie: ”Haven’t heard of them. It’s a band.
Bernard: “Nope. But I should go now. I was going to find some fruits for my wife and get away from that smell.”
Charlie: “Well I was going too”
Bernard: “What your name?”
Charlie: ”Charlie”
Bernard: “Ok, Charlie. Bye”
[Bernard går og Charlie blir alene.]
Charlie: “A Ba-gua symbol. What the bloody hell is that?”
Liam: “I don’t know. A religious thing from the Taoism or something like that. I just found this picture in a book”
Charlie: “A religious symbol. No, we can’t use that. When we get famous, what do you people will say about us. We could be banned from a church.
Liam: “Banned from a church?”
Charlie: “I don’t know. But I will not use some religious thing in the band.”
Liam: “So you’re the king of this band and we have to listen to you.”
Charlie: “We haven’t started it yet. I just thought it could be cool to start a band. Like you could sing, because you like to do that and me on guitar. And we’ll ask Joey if he want to play drums.”
Liam: “Who will play bass?”
Charlie. “We’ll figure that out.”
[Inne i luken. Michael har nettopp sett at det står ”Dad?” på skjermen. ]
Michael: ”Locke! Eko! Look at this! It’s Walt!”
Michael skriver inn:
>: Walt? Is that you?
Locke og Eko kommer og ser.
Mr. Eko: ”Wait a minute. It doesn’t have to mean that it’s Walt. It could be they who are making this up.
Locke: ”That’s right. And in the new Orientation-clip, Dr. Marvin says that this thing can lead to another incident.”
[En ny melding kommer opp]
>: It’s me. I escaped from them.
Michael er nesten på gråten.
Michael: ”You see. It’s him.
Mr. Eko: It could be a trap. A trap from them.
Locke: “He’s right. They took your boy, and they are maybe fooling with you. Maybe they want to know where we are and take us.
[Michael skriver inn en ny setning]
>: Where are you?
De ventet litt og tittet på klokken som nå visste 42.
Locke: ”Well I’m going now, so Michael you can take the next shift”
De svarte ikke, og Locke gikk ut.
Charlie gikk litt lenger inn i jungelen og da han var sikker på at ingen var der, tok han frem porselensfiguren og så på den. Plutselig så var kom Locke og sa:
Locke: ”Charlie?”
Charlie ble så skremt at han mistet porselensfiguren på bakken og den knuste.
Charlie tok sekken ned i håp om å skjule det, men det var for sent. Locke så det.
Locke: Do you remember when you gave the island the heroin and the Island gave something back.
Charlie: "yes, I remember, but I can explain,”
Locke: “What if the thing the Island gave back, can be taken again. Do you wanna loose your guitar?”
Charlie: “No, but the plane was loaded with lots of heroin, and I couldn’t leave it alone. So I had to…”
Locke: “Wait!”
[Locke går mot Charlie og ser at porselensfiguren landet på noe. Det landet på noe stål.]
Charlie: ”What? Do you wanna see the drugs?”
Locke: “It landed on something. This maybe an another hatch.
[Locke børstet bort heroinet og noe av gresset der og de begynte å grave.]
[Klokken i bunkeren viste 23 og de ventet fremdeles på et svar]
Mr. Eko: ”What if he’s gone?”
Michael: “Why should he leave me?”
Mr. Eko: “Maybe they found him? Or maybe they are fooling with you, and know where we are right now”
Michael: “No! How can you know that. They wanted Walt. Not us!”
Mr. Eko: “We know a little more about them than you, because they’ve attacked us, abducted us and murdered us. They’re smart.”
[De så på klokken igjen og så at tallet 20 gikkt il 19, mens de fortsatt ventet på svar]
Charlie: ”So this is a hatch. Again.”
Locke: “It’s not the same. This one isn’t cement. It’s aluminium and we have a handle here to. This one shouldn’t be that hard to open.”
Charlie: “I’m going for the axe,”
Locke: “Yeah, do that,”
[Charlie puttet heroinet tilbake i sekken og gikk veien tilbake ]
[Charlie, Liam, Joey og den nye gitaristen Craig har et bandmøte]
Charlie: ”Wow, It’s great to say that our first song is done.”
Liam: “Yeah, and the concert tomorrow will be great to.”
Joey: “And good that we have Craig on guitar. He’s really good.”
Craig: “Thanks, but we will only play “Worst Day” right.”
Charlie: “That’s right, but should our name be “Driveshaft”?”
Liam: “It’s a great name. What, don’t you like it?”
Charlie: “No, no, no. It’s fine.”
[Sawyer og Kate er på vei mot stranda]
Sawyer: ”Ok, so you’re sayon that Locke and Boone found a hatch, they hold it like a secret, and you went to a slave ship to get some dynamite to blow it up, right?”
Kate: “That’s right. And down in the hatch lived Desmond, but he ran off in the jungle.”
Sawyer: “But what happened to The Nutty Professor?”
Kate: “Who?”
Sawyer: “Arzt!”
Kate: “Oh, he wasn’t too good with the dynamite.”
[Sawyer og Kate har kommet frem til stranden og ser mennesker de kjenner. De får høre en del ”Hi Sawyer” fra noen og sånt.]
Charlie: ”Hey Sawyer!”
Charlie kommer løpende mot ham.
Charlie: ”Where is the axe you used on the raft?”
Sawyer: “Over there!”
[Sawyer peker mot et noe ved som ligger ved stranda som de brukte for å kjøre flåten ned mot havet. Der lo brannøksa]
Charlie: ”Okay, thanks. And by the way it’s good to see you.”
[Tilbake til luken der Michael og Eko fortsatt venter på svar fra den andre siden.]
Mr. Eko: ”I think it’s over,”
Michael: “No, It can’t be over now!”
[De ser på klokken som viser at tallet 16 har gått ned til 15]
Michael: ”Why is it taking so long?!”
Mr. Eko: “I don’t know, nut maybe…”
Plutselig kommer det en beskjed:
>: Temparonic
Michael: ”What!”
Mr. Eko: “Maybe it’s a code”
Michael: “No, I don’t understand it.”
[Plutselig blir skjermen svart og så kommer det normale tegnet ]
Michael: ”No, no, no, no, no!” og Michael slår på komputeren for å få samtalen tilbake.
[Locke kommer inn]
Locke: ”Something new on the computer?”
Michael: “Yeah, the message “Temparonic” came an after that it went to the same thing”
Locke: “Temparonic?”
Michael: “Yeah, I don’t know what the hell that means, but that was the last thing he said,”
Mr. Eko: “It does not have to mean that it’s Walt that writes that”
Locke: “I was just going to get one of the guns, but I will come back here and take the shift after you Michael.”
Michael: “Okay,”
Mr. Eko: “What do you need a gun for?”
Locke: “Oh, Me and Charlie found a hatch not so long from here. It has a handle, but it’s hard to open it, so to be secured I’ll rather have a gun with me. Maybe you wanna help Mr. Eko.”
Mr. Eko: “You can call me Tobechukwu. That’s my first name.”
Locke: “Ok, well Tobechukwu. We’re going now”
Charlie er ved den nye luken, men finner ikke Locke. Han følger etter hans fotspor og ender opp ved en dør. Der står Locke og Eko.
Charlie: ”What is that bloody door?”
Locke: “That’s the other entrance to the hatch.”
Charlie: “Oh, can I come inside. I’ve heard that there is some albums there. Maybe Driveshaft is…”
Locke: “No, Charlie! You can’t come inside. And there’s no albums of Driveshaft there. Those albums there are from the 60’s, 70’s and the 80’s. No Driveshaft!”
Charlie: “Why are you telling me that in that mood!”
Locke: “Let’s go!”
Charlie: “Hey! Have I said something wrong!”
De går i fra ham og han star der ved inngangen. Han går etter dem.
Liam og resten av bandet har kommet hjem til gitaristen Craig for å se på videoen av dems første opptreden.
Charlie: ”That was great. And did you see all the girls. We know now that we maybe has some groupies.”
Liam: “Yeah, a hell of a concert!”
Joey: ”Yeah, That’s right. And a pretty cool drumset!”
Craig: “Yeah, That’s right.”
Charlie: “But something was awkward, but I don’t remember it. Something was not as we plays it.”
Liam: “Neeh, That’s all in your head”
Joey: “Yeah, I think something wasn’t right, but what the heck. It was fabulous anyway”
Liam: “Well, lets see the concert again then”
De ser på filmen. Alt går bra, men Charlie merker hva som var galt.
Charlie: ”Hey! That’s not the solo that you usually played. You’re playing something else.”
Joey: “Yes, that’s right, but that one is better!”
Charlie: “That’s not the point. You said you would play that solo that we usually play. That’s the one who fits in. On this concert you’re only playing some bloody “impromptu”, some bloody mess that doesn’t fit in.
Liam: “Hey! I am the one who plays solo guitar Baby brother!”
Craig: “It wasn’t such a big deal. “
Charlie: “Don’t talk to me that way! ”
Charlie fortsetter å gå. Han er lit sur på Locke over måten han pratet til ham.
The Beach.
[Sawyer har kommet tilbake til hans lille telt på stranden. Han legger seg ned for å slappe av, da han ser Sayid komme forbi]
Sayid: ”So you’re back now”
Sawyer: “Yep, That’s right. I’ve been through a lot since the raft exploded,”
Sayid: “They carried you on a litter. I saw it.
Sawyer: “Hey, What now? Were you there?”
Sayid: “You don’t know about don’t you?”
Sawyer: “I know about the slave ship, Arzt’s explosion and stuff like that. Freckless is the kind of lady who don’t tell a lot.”
Sayid: “Shannon saw someone in the jungle. She ran into the jungle to find him.”
Sawyer: “Find who? The Candy Man”
Sayid: “No! She saw Walt in the jungle. I thought she was hallucinating, but I was wrong. I saw him with her the same night we found you.”
Sawyer er interessert i det Sayid sier.
Sawyer: ”How could she see Walt. He’s with the others right now.”
Sayid: “I don’t know about that.”
Sawyer reiser seg opp.
Sayid: ”Where are you going?”
Sawyer: “I have to speak with Shannon!”
Sayid: “Stop!”
Sawyer stopper og snur seg.
Sayid: ”She’s dead.”
Sawyer: “What?”
Sayid: “Ana-Lucia did a mistake and shot her.”
[Locke, Eko og Charlie har kommet til luken. De graver bort alt jord ved siden av.
Locke prøver dra opp håndtaket, men det er veldig hardt. Han får det ikke opp.
Locke: ”Maybe we should use the axe now”
Charlie tar opp øksa og slår på luka.
Locke: “No, no no! You have to hit here”
Locke peker på sprekken mellom luken og resten av aluminiumet.
Charlie: ”Ok, ok!”
Charlie slår og slår, men den kommer ikke opp.
Locke tar øksa fra ham og bruker den selv. Nå blir luken enda mer ødelagt og de får åpnet den snart.
Mr. Eko: “Ok, I think we can just kick it now”
Locke: “Yeah”
Locke tar i et hardt spark og luken knekker og faller ned i mørket.
De ser en skitten trapp som går nedover.
Locke tar frem pistolen og begynner å gå.
Locke: ”We go now. Me first, Tobechukwu and Charlie you can stay here in case someone comes”
Charlie: “What! I can’t come with you!”
Locke: “It’s better if we are going. You stay here!”
Locke og Eko går ned trappen og kommer til rommet. Det er mørkt, men Eko tok med lommelykt så de kan se.
Når de er der nede så kommer de til et lite rom. Det er en ståldør der som er låst, men rundt i rommet er det noen ting. Det ligger et brunt og skittent skrivebord der, men det som er det mest skrekkelige er det døde liket so sitter der. Han har på seg presteklær.
Locke: ”I think he’s from the beechcraft.
Eko ser på ham og forstår ikke hva han mener.
Locke: ”For a week ago we found a beechcraft in the jungle. It was a guy named Boone with me. I had trouble with my legs, so Boone had to climb up there. There was a radio there, and I think he made contact.
Eko: “It was him we heard on our radio. We heard him say: “We’re the survivors of Flight 815”. But what does this beechcraft have to do with this priest.”
Locke: “Because the people from that plane was smugglers. They smuggled heroin. There where dressed as priests and came from Nigeria.
Eko har et spesielt blikk nå.
De ser på skrivebordet og ser på papirene. Locke tar med papirene i sekken. Det ligger en bok der også som han tar med.
Locke: ”I think we should go back now. It’s nothing more here”
De begynner å gå opp trappen og ser at Charlie ikke er der lenger.
Locke: ”Charlie!”
Locke ser på bakken og ser sporene. De begynner å følge etter dem.
[Tilbake til Michael]
Han skriver inn koden og tallene går tilbake til 108, imens så sjekker han kablene igjen og finner ut at på den røde kabelen så står det mystiske ordet Temparonic.
[Tilbake til Locke og Eko]
De følger fortsatt sporene.
Locke: ”Oh no. I think I know where he might be going”
Eko: “Where?”
Locke: “To the beechcraft”
Eko: “Why do he want to go there?”
Locke: ”Because he was a drug addict. On heroin. He stopped, but I think he will start again,
Vi ser fjeset til Charlie som stirrer på flyet.
Charlie er på en restaurant og spiser nudler og plutselig kommer Liam forbi.
Liam: ”Charlie!”
Charlie ser opp og ser Liam.
Charlie: ”So good to see you Liam”
Liam: “What are you doing here?”
Charlie: “I’m just taking lunch. How about you?”
Liam: “Well, we’re going to have a concert here tomorros,”
Charlie: “Oh, so great! How is it going there? In the band,”
Liam: “It’s not so good. After you quitted it it’s been some problems.”
Charlie: “Oh. That’s bad. So you’re the bassplayer now?”
Liam: “Yes, but it’s not the same.”
Charlie: “Ok, what do you mean?”
Liam: “I want to ask you ‘bout something.”
Charlie: “Yeah, sure. What is it?”
Liam: “Would you join the band again?”
Charlie ser ned i nudlene og vet ikke hva han skal svare.
Liam: ”Come on! Please! It’s not the same without you. You started it all.”
Charlie: “I don’t know. It’s just problems”
Liam: “No, no, no. It’s not a problem.”
Charlie: “But you’re fine without me. And you have a concert tomorrow, so I can ‘t join”
Liam: “I lied. There is no concert. Please Charlie. Can you come back? You are the driveshaft in Driveshaft. I mean, You are Driveshaft!”
Charlie ser opp igjen og sier.
Charlie: ”Ok, I will come back”
Locke og Eko følger fortsatt etter sporene til Charlie og plutselig ser noe røyk.
Locke: ”NO! Not ”The Others”!”
Locke og Eko løper og løper og til slutt kommer de til beechcraften som star i flammer. Så ser de Charlie med en fakkel i hånden og ser tilbake til Locke. Locke smiler tilbake til Charlie, mens Eko stirrer på flyet som for ham ser merkverdig kjent ut.
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Trivia og annet:
- Tobechukwu betyr “Praise God”
- Jeg VET at Charlie spiller bass i Driveshaft, men jeg ville gjøre om litt. Jeg tok mest frem om starten av bandet. Det forandrer etterhvert.
- Grunnen til at Driveshafts første egenlagde låt het "Worst day" siden bandet vårts første låt heter også "Worst day".
Redigert av Driveshaft 5 Jan, 2006 17:15:06
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Episode 23 - Season Finale
Season 02 - Episode 23.
"The Truth - Part I"
Previously on LOST...
Zeke: "...we're gonna have to take the boy".
Michael: "I'm not givin' you anybody..."
Walt: "Dad! Daaaaad!!"
Michael: "Waaaaaaaaaaaaaalt!!!??"
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Jack: "May I ask you something?"
Ana: "Shoot".
Jack: "How long does it take to train an army?"
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Sayid: "He is one of Them!"
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Zeke: "Right here, there is a line... If you cross that line, we go from misunderstanding... to somethin' else"
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Henry: "...I never entered the numbers... I never pressed the button".
Locke: "You're lying..."
Henry: "No, I'm done lying".
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[Michael comes exhausted out of the jungle...]
Kate: "Michael?"
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[Jack, Sawyer, Kate, Michael and Sayid are in the jungle...]
Sawyer: "Do ye know where you're goin', Seppo?"
Michael: "Of course... Come on, this way..."
Jack: "Are you sure about this, Michael?"
Michael: "Yeah... We can take 'em... I'm gonna get my son back".
Sayid: "May I ask you something?"
Michael: "Yeah... sure".
Sayid: "Are you sure we can take them, or are you just desperat to get Walt back?"
Jack: "Sayid..."
Sayid: "A father would do anything to get his son back, Jack".
Michael: "I know what I'm doing..."
[Back in the hatch, Locke is sitting in the sofa, stearing at the floor...]
Eko: [enters] "Hello, John".
Locke: "Hi..."
Eko: "Is there something wrong?"
Locke: "No, Eko. Everything is fine..."
Eko: "You look upset".
Locke: "It's... It's just all this..."
Eko: "All what?"
[Silence]
Locke: "This island... I thought it was special".
Eko: "This island is special, John... and you know it".
[At the beach, Claire is worried about Aaron's mysterious sickness...]
Claire: "Hey Sun, do you know where Jack is?"
Sun: "No, Claire... Is everything ok?"
Claire: "It's just... Aaron is sick again".
Sun: "I'm sure he'll be fine".
Hurley: "Hey..."
Sun: "Hello, Hurley".
Claire: "Have you seen Jack?"
Hurley: "Eh, Jack? He went into the jungle with Michael and the rest to find Walt..."
Claire: "Ah... I think Aaron is sick again".
Hurley: "I had this dog once... Jerry. He became sick, then he died".
Claire: "Aaron's not a dog, Hurley..."
Hurley: "Oh, I know... He looks like one, though".
[Silence]
Hurley: "...joke dude, joke".
[Back in the jungle... Michael stops suddenly].
Jack: "Michael?"
Michael: "...I'm sorry".
Jack: "Sorry for what?"
Kate: "Jack...?"
Sayid: "It's a trap..."
[Jack notice that several armed men surrounds them, and "Zeke" appears].
Sayid: "I knew it!"
Michael: "I'm sorry..."
Sawyer: "You tricked us, Kazoo!?"
Zeke: "Are ye girls done talkin'...?"
Sawyer: "You!? You and me ain't done - "
Zeke: "Shut up!"
[Sawyer tries to attack Zeke, but two men stops him].
Zeke: "Bag and gag this muffinboy..."
Mac: "Okay, boss..."
Sawyer: "Hands of me, Maddy!"
[Sawyer is knocked out by the men...]
Kate: "Sawyer!?"
Jack: "What the hell is going on Michael?"
Michael: "I'm so sorry, Jack..."
Zeke: "Ooooh... Are you kids gonna cry too?"
Jack: "What are you doing, Michael?"
Zeke: "You see, Jack... I told Mikeyboy here that if he wanted his kid back... He had to do us a favour. And now you're all here... Good work, Mike".
Michael: "Now, where's my son?"
Zeke: "Well, the thing is... You ain't gonna get him back. Brandt, Alex... Take Michael back to the station".
[Some men ties him up and take him away]
Zeke: "This is great... Right, Mac? Tell me what this is?"
Mac: "Beautiful, sir".
Zeke: "Beautiful? Sunsets are beautiful, newborn kitties are beautiful. This... this is fucking spectacular!"
Jack: "What is wrong with you?"
Zeke: "Excuse me?"
Sayid: "My gues would be... a lot".
Zeke: "Easy now, Sayid..."
Kate: "You wear a fake beard... Why?"
Zeke: "...Woah, easy now girl".
Jack: "Yeah, who the hell do you think you are!?"
[Jack aims at Zeke].
Sayid: "Jack...??"
Zeke: "You're not gonna shoot me".
Jack: "No?"
Zeke: "No. You're not".
Jack: "Give me one good reason not to..."
Zeke: "You wanna know where your father is, don't you?"
LOST
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Sesong 3 Episode 1
Tenkte jeg kunne lage en fanfic for hvordan jeg tror starten på sesong 3 vil være. Jeg har ikke den kreativiten og greier ikke å skape den samme stemningen, men dette her er sånn ca. hva jeg tror vil skje.
Dette her er altfor kort for en episode og har kun ett flashback, men jeg drar til Polen i morgen så jeg måtte kutte ett sted.
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(Flashback blir skrevet i kursivt)
(Hurley-centric)
Episode 1 Sesong 3
Previously on Lost...
Kelvin: Fail-safe! Turn this key and this all goes away. *poof!*
[Michael og Walt drar bort med båten]
Hurley: But what about my friends?
Gale: Your friends are coming home with us.
Desmond: It's real! It's all bloody real!! Now, push the damn button!!
Vi ser Locke kaste computeren i bakken.
Desmond: I'm sorry for whatever happened that made you stop believing. But it's all real. Now I've got to go and make it all go away.
Vi ser luka riste, Eko komme bort til Locke
Locke: "I was wrong"
Vi ser Desmond vri nøkkelen og litt av Dischargen og når luka faller ned i bakken.
Bernard: "Where's Locke -- Eko?"
Charlie: "They're not back yet?"
Vi ser at Jack, Kate og Sawyer får hette over hodet.
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Alt er helt mørkt. Det eneste vi hører er pusten til noen og skritt helt til vi hører en knirkende dør åpne. Vi hører noen stemmer. Det er folksomt og man kan til og med høre noen barn. Så er det masse skritt som om noen går ned en trapp. Vi hører en dør til og så er det noen som drar opp noe som gjør at vi ser alt sammen. Vi ser Pickett i et mørkt rom. Det vi ser er et bilde av en grønn fugl på veggen ved siden av døren som er en lys metalldør med et oktogonalt vindu og det eneste som lyser er lyspæra som henger i taket.
Pickett: ”Hello James”
Sawyer snur seg og ser at Jack og Kate sitter i stoler de også uten hetter de også. Tom står ved siden av dem.
Pickett: ”And hello to you too. I just have to do one thing before you proceed to your room”
Sawyer: “You’re not touchin’ me at all” greier han å få fram med munnbindet.
Pickett: “It’s just a test”
Sawyer sparker til ham, men Pickett rekker å stikke en sprøyte i ham.
Så blir det svart igjen.
5 timer tidligere
Vi ser Vincents øye. Han løper i jungelen. Helt til han kommer til et stort krater. Trær rundt det er knekt og i det krateret er det en del jord. Undergangen til luken ligger som om noen hadde knust det helt. Det er det eneste vi ser bortsett fra all jorda i krateret.
Lost
Hurley går i skogen og kommer mot en stor bakke. Han legger merke til noe og det er at det er sort røyk som siger opp i fra ett sted bak den store bakken.
Hurley går mot røyken.
Hurley sitter i en stor sal med masse Backgammon-brett. Dette ser ut som det er 4 år før flykrasjet.
”Everybody. I have the final results. We have a tradition to have the last years winner to read up the final results, but Mr. John Locke didn’t show up today so I should read the final results”
Hurley er utenfor salen i kiosken og kjøper litt sjokolade da han plutselig møter på hans bror Diego.
Diego: ”Hi Hugo”
Hurley: “Diego? What are you doing here?”
Diego: “What? I can’t see my brother in a big Backgammon contest”
Hurley: “Yes, but I expected my father to come. He didn’t show up”
Diego ser ned på bakken og det er tydelig at noe har skjedd.
Diego: ”You see. Something happened to him”
Hurley: “What do you mean?”
Diego drar han med opp.
Diego: ”Let’s go outside. It’s too crowdy here”
De går ut av salen og satte seg ned ved ett bord i rommet utenfor salen.
Diego: ”Listen. Dad was driving to this contest and parked at a gas station. And, uhm, he got shot by some mobsters.”
Hurley sitter med et tomt utrykk og sier ingenting.
Diego: ”The mobsters were not after him but someone else on the gas station. He was the only witness so I guess they shot him because of that”
Hurley: “When did this happen?”
Diego: "Not long before the contest"
Vi ser Otherne med Kate, Jack og Sawyer gåendes på bukta tilbake til jungelen.
Tom: ”Stop!”
Alle ser opp og vi får det samme blikket som i Exodus Part 1 der Camp Jack ser på den sorte røyken sige fra langt inne i jungelen. Det viser seg at det er røyk fra ikke langt i nærheten.
Tom: ”Why haven’t we seen that before?”
Henry: “I’ll go there”
Tom: “I can do it”
Henry: “I know them more than you. I’ll go there”
Tom: “Ok, ok. Just go. ”
Henry løper inn i jungelen.
Plutselig er vi på havet og ser båten kjøre i fra øya. Den er kun en liten landmasse igjen.
Walt: ”It’s weird that we’re finally leaving this island” sier han mens han sitter på dekket og better ett papirfly
Michael: “Yeah. We’ve been through a lot on this place”
Walt: “What are we going to do when we get home”
Michael: “I’ll join the construction company again and get you at school. And, hey, We can visit that Brian Porter. ”
Walt: “Neh, Aren’t we gonna rescue the others?”
Michael: “Ehm, yes. Of course”
En liten pause mens de ser på øya. Walt tar fram papirflyet og kaster det ut på vannet, men en rar ting er at det flyter raskt tilbake på vei mot øya.
Walt: ”Dad”
Michael: ”I see that too.”
De ser på det papirflyet som snart var ute av syne. Michael snur seg og ser på direksjonen for å se om han kjører riktig og ser tilbake på øya som nesten er som en liten potetklump
Michael: ”Prepare for a last look at this place”
Walt: “This isn’t our last time here”
Michael ser litt rart på ham.
Nå er det helt sort helt inntil vi hører stemmen til en veldig kjent kar
”Boxman!”
Locke våkner opp. Dem var omgitt av brun støv som om noen hadde ristet 1000 oldgamle bøker rett foran dem. Locke var litt ør i hodet og så på Eko som lå ved siden av. Han stod opp han også. Han så tilbake på Desmond.
Locke: ”What happened?” spurte han i en fortumlet tone”
Desmond trekker opp fail-safe nøkkelen
Desmond: ”This saved us! This expels all the electromagnetic energy. There’s no more button pushing here now. This blows the whole thing up. ”
Eko kikker på bombedøra og på Locke.
Eko: ”Good thing you closed the blast door”
Locke: “Yeah”
Desmond tar opp kablene for å prøve å åpne døra, men den rikker seg ikke. Ingen av maskinene i rommet lyser og det ser ut som de ikke fungerer.
Locke: ”Why isn’t them working?”
Desmond sparker i maskinen.
Desmond: ”Argh, it’s because of the discharge. Every electric thing doesn’t work."
Desmond setter seg ned og putter fjeset ned i hendene for å tenke.
Eko tar opp jesusstaven og slår i veggene for å finne en måte å komme seg ut på.
Eko: ”Charlie!” roper han ut fra døra
Eko: ”Charlie! Are you there?”
Locke står og ser på Desmond og undrer seg over det som har skjedd.
Locke: ”So this computer room has protected us. Maybe it was meant to be that way. That if someone failed to do this job and had to do the fail safe under this room and blow the thing up. That means that this room protected us from the damage outside”
Eko hører på og ser på døra igjen
Eko: ”Charlie! We are planning to come out. Are you hurt? We are going to come out and help you as soonest--”
Desmond: “There’s no way out! The blast doors are down and the only thing that can get them up is this cables. There is no way in bloody hell we can get out of this doors or this room”
Alle er stille.
Locke: ”What if we go under it?”
Hurley ser den sorte røyken og en båt tjoret fast ved siden av.
I båten.
Sayid legger merke til Hurley.
Hurley ser på Others’s sin forlatte camp og vi hører han mumle dude rett før han legger merke til Sayid som står oppreist i seilbåten. Sayid tar opp AK-en og hopper ut av båten og lander i vannet som går opp til knærne hans. Han løper mot Hurley som nettopp legger merke til ham.
Hurley: ”Sayid? What are you doin’ here?”
Sayid går bort til ham.
Sayid: ”Where’s everybody?”
Hurley: “I can’t tell you.”
Sayid: “What?”
Hurley: “Seriously. I can’t say that“
Sayid: “I don’t have time for this Hurley! Where is Jack, Kate and Sawyer?”
Hurley: ”OKAY! They took them. They sent me back to tell you that you can’t come back to them because they’ll kill them.“
Sayid ser på ham og tror på ham. Han går bort til båten og Sun ser mot han som lurer på hva som har skjedd.
Sayid: ”Take the boat back to camp and tell everyone to stay calm. We’ll fix this”
Han går tilbake til Hurley og Hurley ser at han har lyst til å dra dit.
Hurley: ”Dude, you can’t go back to them”
Sayid: “I have to and you have to come with me”
Hurley: “No”
Sayid: “Do it for Libby”
Hurley er stille og sier til slutt: “Ok. I’m coming”
Sayid: “You have to tell me where they are”
Hurley: “I don’t know where they are taking them. They had bags over our heads. All we saw was a long dock.”
Sayid: “Where is that dock?”
Hurley: ”Okay, follow me”
Sayid: “Thanks.” Sa han og de startet å løpe den veien.”
Back in the hatch
Locke glir ned i åpningen til underdelen av computerrommet. Det ser veldig ødelagt ut der og det finnes masse lag med støv. Eko krabber først etterfulgt av Desmond og Locke etter. De legger merke til Failsafe-nøkkelhullet i Dharmategnet.
Locke: ”So this is the failsafe you were talking about?”
Desmond: “Yes, I remember the time Kelvin showed me this. Didn’t know how big effect this little thing made.”
Eko: “I can’t see a way out”
Locke: “Maybe you can smash some of the walls”
Eko slår i betongveggen, men det er ikke mye som rikker til.
Desmond: ”Guess we’re trapped here, huh”
Sayid og Hurley løper ned den bakken i jungelen. Sayid stopper for han ser noe på bakken. Det er notisblokk. Han tar den opp, men hører en lyd.
Hurley: ”What?”
Sayid: ”Shh!”
Det er den samme whoosh-lyden til den sleggen til Ethan og så treffer den brystet til Sayid som slår ham ned.
Hurley: ”Sayid!”
Henry Gale dukker opp fra buskene og sier: ”You didn’t hear us or what?”
Hurley: ”What do you want?”
Henry: “Your job is to go back to your camp and tell the others never to came back”
Hurley: “My job! Why me? Why is it my job to be a messenger?”
Henry: “It’s just how it works”
Hurley: “How IT works? Why are you doin’ this? What’s the point of taking people and hurting them”
Henry: “You did the same thing to me!”
Hurley: But, but…What are going to do with Sayid”
Henry: “Nothing. He’ll wake up and be fine. I’m sure he knows where your camp is, but you can’t wait for him. He may suspect something. He knows how to see if you’re lying. That’s why you have to go right now. Go back to your camp”
Hurley: “But…”
Henry: “Go! Go back and tell the others not to come. Is that understood?”
Hurley ser ned og sier: “Yeah”
Henry: ”Good. Then go now”
Hurley nøler litt, men løper av gårde.
Vi ser Tom, Miss Klugh og alle de andre følge Jack, Kate og Sawyer som har hettene over hodet. I bakgrunnen ser vi den store bakken med de sorte steinene med hullet i på toppen, men det er ikke det som er stort. Det er dørene til noe som ligner et lite rundt hus som bare er i metall. Vi ser noen vinduer der og på dørene står det Dharma Headquarter. De lukker døren.
Vi ser ikke mer etter dette bare helt fram til at Pickett drar av hetten på Sawyer.
Pickett: ”Hello James”
Sawyer snur seg og ser at Jack og Kate sitter i stoler de også uten hetter de også. Tom står ved siden av dem.
Pickett: ”And hello to you too. I just have to do one thing before you proceed to your room”
Sawyer: “You’re not touchin’ me at all” greier han å få fram med munnbindet.
Pickett: “It’s just a test”
Sawyer sparker til ham, men Pickett rekker å stikke en sprøyte i ham.
Pickett: ”Ok. We just have to do tests on you too” sier han til Jack og Kate som ser redde ut.
Pickett stikker i en sprøyte på dem og de faller i søvne.
L O S T
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"Orders"
Previously on Lost:
[Sayid har blitt slått ut, og Henry konfronterer Hurley som ikke har følgt hans ordre].
Henry: “Go! Go back and tell the your friends not to come. Understood?”
Hurley: “Yeah”
Henry: ”Good. Then go now”
[Tom, Miss Klugh og alle de andre følge Jack, Kate og Sawyer som har hettene over hodet. I bakgrunnen ser vi den store bakken med de sorte steinene med hullet i på toppen, men det er ikke det som er stort. Det er dørene til noe som ligner et lite rundt hus som bare er i metall og betong. De lukker døren. Vi ser ikke mer etter dette bare helt fram til at Pickett drar av hetten på Sawyer].
Sawyer: “You’re not touchin’ me, Chazo”.
Pickett: “It’s just a test. Sweet dreams”. [stikker ham med en sprøyte].
Sawyer: ”Son of a bitch!”
Pickett: [ser på Kate og Jack] ”Okay. We just have to do tests on you too”.
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[Ved stranden].
Rose: “Hey Claire, have you seen Jack?”
Claire: “No. Charlie, do you know where Jack is?”
Charlie: “Didn’t he go to find those people in the jungle?”
[Hurley kommer pesende ut gjennom jungelen].
Rose: ”Hurley?”
Hurley: ”Water… Need… Water”.
Rose: [gir ham en vannflaske] ”Hurley, are you allright?”
Hurley: ”They got them…”
Claire: ”Who?”
Hurley: “The Others. They got Jack, Kate... and Sawyer”.
LOST
[Mr. Eko, Locke og Desmond har omsider klart å komme seg ut av The Swan].
Locke: [gråtende] ”I’m sorry. I’m so sorry”.
[Mr. Eko og Desmond ser på ham].
Desmond: ”We’re allright. Don’t worry”.
Locke: “It’s all my fault...”
Mr. Eko: “John. We’re allright”.
[Samtidig i The Other’s leir].
Kate: [våkner opp i et rom] “Where are we?”
Henry: “You’re safe”.
Kate: “Where the hell are we!?”
Tom: [ler] “I think she’s mad at you, Boss”.
Henry: [setter seg ned] “Just do as you’re told, Kate”.
[Sawyer våkner omsider opp i den andre enden av rommet].
Tom: ”Hey, sit up”.
Sawyer: ”Shut up”.
Tom: “How’d you like me to put my boot up your ass... sideways?”
Sawyer: “Oh, this is just great”.
Henry: “Take them outside”.
Tom: [tar frem en pistol] “Come with me”.
Sawyer: “What, you’re gonna kill me now?”
Tom: “I can kill you whenever I please, so behave”.
Sawyer: [stopper] “Are you threatning me?”
Tom: “Keep on going!”
Sawyer: “So where the hell are we going? Sailing?”
Tom: “Shut up”.
[Samtidig. Locke, Eko og Desmond har kommet tilbake til stranden].
Charlie: ”Bloody pope, what happened to you?”
Rose: “Oh deer. Are you allrigt? Locke, you’re bleeding”.
Locke: “I’m fine”.
Hurley: “Dude”.
Desmond: “Where’s the doctor?”
Claire: “Jack? Hurley said he went off into the jungle to find those... people”.
Locke: “We gotta go after them”.
[Kate og Sawyer blir brakt ut til en strand].
Pickett: ”Hey”.
Sawyer: “No. Not you again”.
Kate: “What’s going on here?”
Pickett: “You should really stop asking questions. Can’t you just give it up, it’s over”.
Sawyer: “Oh, you’re so melodramatic”.
Pickett: [lugger Sawyer] “What did you say? Speak up. People don’t mumble when they speak to me”.
Sawyer: “You act like a girl”.
Pickett: [slår til Sawyer] “You have no idea what I’m capable of!”
[En annen Other kommer bort til dem].
Mortom: ”Shut the hell up, and start working”.
Sawyer: “Yeah, and who are you? Santa?”
Mortom: “This is no dream, James. This is really happening”.
Kate: “James?”
Mortom: [laughs] “You’re a little secret-keeper, aren’t you? Pickett, you can go now”.
Pickett: “Thank you, Sir”.
Mortom: “Okay, so... Tell me if I got this right. You three came here with Mike, to get that kid back? And then you was captured? So pathetic”.
Kate: “What have you done to Jack?”
Mortom: “Jack’s fine... I think. Hah, well... He’s better of than you”.
Kate: “Where is he?”
Mortom: “Now, what did Pickett say about asking questions? You two have no rights here, only orders to be carried out. If you have a problem with that, we’ll make other arrangements”.
[Samtidig. Henry kommer inn til Jack, som sitter i et annet rom].
Henry: ”Hello, Jack. You don’t talk much, do you?”
Jack: “Why... Why are we here?”
Henry: [Ser i gulvet]. “Jack. You’re not suppose to ask questions. We’re the good guys, remember?”
Jack: “You... You killed us”.
Henry: “You’ve got it all wrong, Jack. We helped you”.
Jack: “The fiercest enemy is the man who has nothing left to lose. So what about telling me what the hell you are doing?”.
Henry: “Stop asking questions. I’m not kidding, Jack”.
Jack: “You know what?”
Henry: “What?”
Jack: “Neither am I! [Slår ned Henry].
LOST
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[Unable to get Charlie with him, Desmond exits the Looking Glass and goes back to the beach only to find it abandoned. At the radiotower, everyone hugs and wait for their rescue. Jack talks to Kate].
JACK: I can't believe this is finally happening...
KATE: 94 days...
[A helicopter appears on the sky, and lands next to the radiotower. Four men exits].
KULIBIN: Hello.
JACK: Thank God, you're here...
KULIBIN: No. Thank you. You're the one who called?
JACK: Yeah.
KULIBIN: Where's Naomi?
[Jack turns to Naomi laying on the ground]
KULIBIN: What happened?
JACK: One of ours killed her.
KULIBIN: Right. Minkowski, call Syme.
[They start arguing in russian, before Minkowski makes the call].
MINKOWSKI: Hello? Yeah, it's me. Naomi's dead. Yes. Yes, I understand.
KULIBIN: You're the survivours of Oceanic Flight 815?
JACK: Yeah.
KULIBIN: I am Ivan Kulibin.
[Meanwhile, Sayid, Juliet, Sawyer, Hurley, Bernard and Jin are on their way to the radiotower]
DESMOND: Sayid! Sayid!
SAYID: Desmond?
HURLEY: Dude, where's Charlie?
[Desmond doesn't answer]
DESMOND: He didn't make it, brother... He turned of the jamming. It's not Penny's ship.
SAYID: Who's Penny?
DESMOND: Penelope. My girlfriend... The girl who parachuted here said she was working for Penelope. She wasn't! She lied, brother.
[Juliet takes the walkie-talkie and tries to make contact with Jack]
JULIET: Jack?! Jack!?
[Jack picks up the walkie-talkie]
JACK: Juliet? We did it! Where are you? We're at the Radio Tower with them. We're rescued!
JULIET: Jack, listen... You need to run! Hide!
JACK: What?!
JULIET: They're not who they say they are! You all have to hide!
[Kulibin grabs his gun and aims at Jack]
KULIBIN: Drop it or I'll kill you.
LOST INTRO
[The losties are being tied up by Minkowski and two other men]
JACK: Who are you? Why are you here?
KULIBIN: We're not here for you...
JACK: What the hell do you want?!
KULIBIN: People, fear not... We are here to get back something that is ours. Something we've apperantly have lost. Certainly there are those who are more responsible than others, and they will be held accountable.
JACK: It's him...
[Jack looks at the beaten up Ben]
KULIBIN: Ah, I remember you. Hell, you're Roger's son, aren't you? Namaste.
BEN: I wouldn't consider him my father...
KULIBIN: Oh... That's very dramatic. We brought you to this island... into this world! And we can take you out of it. Forty of our people died that day, Ben. And where were you, huh?
BEN: If truth be told... if you are looking for the guilty, you need only look in the mirror.
[Kulibin beats up Ben]
[Sayid and the rest stops near the radiotower to spy on them]
SAWYER: What the hell is we suppose to do?
SAYID: Juliet? Who are they?
JULIET: I'm not sure. Ben haven't told us much about them.
JIN: We... guns.
HURLEY: Dude, no more shooting.
DESMOND: We can take 'em. We have guns...
JULIET: How can you hope to defeat them?
SAYID: It's worth a try.
[Sayid, Sawyer and Jin grabs a rifle each and aims at the men]
KULIBIN: I guess you have nothing left to loose... So I might as well kill you, Ben.
BEN: I have... the island.
[Minkowski notice something in the bushes]
MINKOWSKI: There's someone here!
KULIBIN: Of course.
[Kulibin helds Ben at gun-point]
KULIBIN: Who's there?!
MINKOWSKI: I told you we should bring more people!
KULIBIN: Shut up. We have this one.
[Jack looks worried at Ben]
BEN: Taking me hostage isn't a very good idea, Ivan. You see, I'm not that popular...
[Kulibin hits him with his gun. Minkowski spots Bernard in the bushes and shoots at him, before being shot by Sawyer. Jin shoots another man and Kulibin is about to shoot Ben, before he gets shoot in the head by Danielle. One man remains, and is knocked out by Ben].
[Sayid, Sawyer, Juliet, Bernard, Ben and Danielle unties everyone and ties up the stranger].
JACK: I don't know what to say...
BEN: I was born into a world you'll never understand, Jack.
[Ben goes over to Danielle]
BEN: Why...
DANIELLE: 16 years ago, you took her away from me. Now, you gave her back...
[She walks away from him, and Ben starts crying. Bernard and Jin reunites with Rose and Sun. Sawyer kisses Kate, while she looks at Jack talking to Sayid].
SAYID: What happened to Naomi?
JACK: Locke. He warned me from making that call...
SAYID: He knew?
JACK: I have no idea how much he knows... He went into the jungle again.
SAYID: So what happens now?
JACK: Their people will come back. We have to hide.
SAYID: Or go with Ben.
[Claire goes over to Desmond]
CLAIRE: Desmond... Where's Charlie?
DESMOND: I'm so sorry...
CLAIRE: Where's Charlie?!
DESMOND: He didn't make it, Claire.
[Claire burst into tears, and Desmond gives her the Greatest Hits-list]
DESMOND: He asked me to give you this.
[as Desmond is about to walk away, he has another flash:
Oceanic Flight 815 crashes on the island. Charlie drowning. The losties are with The Others. Jack is beaten up someone. Penelope arguing with her father. Sayid being held at gun-point. Locke in the jungle. The smoke monster. Ben looking up in the sky. And, Claire and Aaron are not rescued of the island as he told Charlie. He now sees that they are taken by the Dharma Initiative].
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Sesong 4: Episode 1
Som jeg gjør hvert år så starter jeg en fanfiction nå som det er sommer.
Dette var alt det jeg gadd.
Episode 1
- Trapped in the past -
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Orket ikke å finne på flashback, men jeg er litt fornøyd hittil
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The first thing we see is an eye to a man with ginger hair. He's listening to Erike Eigen - I want to marry a lighthouse keeper. Then we see the ocean and realizes that he is on a freighter.
A Man is running to him and shouting:
"Ron, Ron?"
Ron turns around. A white man with brown hair and glasses is running with a satellite phone in his hand. They both wear a blue jumpsuit.
Ron:
"What is it Riley"
Riley:
"You're not gonna believe this, Ron?"
Ron:
"What is it?"
Riley:
"I got a call from an island nearby. They were survivors from a plane and they found Naomi!"
Ron:
"They did! So there's hope after all"
Riley:
"Yes. But the coordinates are +4 8' 15", +162 3' 42, and that's in the middle of the ocean
Ron:
"I believe what this is. Come with me."
They both run with backpacks and guns to the helicopter. They leave very quickly. Ron is steering the helicopter. We see the helicopter leave and stops. We can only see ocean all the way to the horizon.
Ron:
"Riley.."
Riley:
"What now?"
Ron:
"This is it. We are here."
Riley:
"But it's nothing here. Only ocean"
Ron:
"That's odd. This is the actual position"
Suddenly they are dragged by something very powerful. It looks like they are going through a hole. We hear the instruments spinning and the wind is blowing extremely around them like they were in the middle of a tornado. The pressure is high, the helicopter is going in a loop, it looks lika blizzard. But suddenly it stops and they are right above a big island. They land surprisingly safely and looks at eachother.
Riley:
"What the hell was that!"
Ron:
"It looked like a cyclone or a tornado, but the weather was fine. A storm does not start like that. Could it be supernatural. Could it be a - a force that pulled us down here."
Riley:
"I don't know what that was. Do you think you can start the helicopter again?"
Ron:
"Yes. Everything works. But were are the survivors. They should have been here"
Riley goes out and stands near the helicopter.
Riley:
"Wait. I saw something in the jungle there."
Ron:
"Just wait. I'm coming now"
Suddenly a spear goes right through Riley's body when he is standing outside the helicopter. Blood gushes out of his moutha and he falls bak into the helicopter.
Ron:
"Riley!"
For everybody's shock a group of halfnaked polynesian people with rings in ears and nose show up from the jungle. Some of them have torches and some have masks with a lot of feather. A group of maybe 70 people. They have painted themselves in the face and looks like the people from 'King Kong' or 'Apocalypto'. They scream and are standing in shock.
The camera is on one of the polynesians.
Polynesian man #1: (understandable language)
- Subtitled -
"What is that thing standing there."
Polynesian man #2
- Subtitled -
"In the power of 'Aho'eitu. Go back to the abysss prepared for you! Go away!"
Polynesian man reacts on what he was saying.
Polynesian man #1
- Subtitled -
"We do not know what it is. It could be a god. A messenger"
But, all of them look angry and many of them have spears in their hands, ready to do something. They run towards the helicopter. Ron drags Riley's body inside and frantically tries to start the helicopter. They are getting closer and closer. The helicopter starts, but some of them are holding on to the helicopter. The helicopter lifts up and they are attached to the helicopter. They are looking at Ron who tries to get them off. Ron is disgusted by their faces with yellow teeths, rings, tatoos and all the other things they have put on their faces.
Ron:
"Get off. Get off!"
The helicopter is up high. The people can't hold on anymore and falls off. He then gets dragged by the same force that took him inside this place. But this time it's a little different. Ron is feeling sick while the helicopter is dragged up and away from the island. Then the force drags him down and he lands safely on the sand.
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Back at the radio tower.
Jack and Kate are behind the tower.
Jack:
"John! Get back"
Kate:
"What are you doing?"
Jack:
"He killed Naomi. What do you think I'm going to do!"
Suddenly Vincent appears from behind and runs into the jungle.
Jack:
"Vincent!"
Kate and Jack runs after him, but stops. In the middle of the jungle there is a 25 feet tall monument looking like a big ancient table with a mural on it. There is a picture of a group of people. The people had spears in their hands and was looking at something standing white standing on the grass. There were a lot of inscriptions in a language they could not understand.
Kate:
"What is it"
Danielle:
"It's the old civilization"
They turn and see Danielle behind them.
Danielle:
"My team noticed this monument when we were trying to find the source of the radio signal. If you see the mountains drawn on the monument you will see that they are the same mountains depicted in this area"
They are looking up where the radio tower is and it looks exactly the same. The people standing in the mural is standing in the open field where the radio tower is.
Kate:
"Sayid mentioned a four-toed statue. Maybe they are the people that build it."
Danielle:
"Yes, we saw it too. They may be the people who build the rope-bridges and drawn a lot of other murals on the island. They have even build a big temple. When we got here a month after our crash was the white thing in the middle of the picture that caught our attention."
Kate:
"it looks like the people on the picture are very angry and looks directly the white thing"
Danielle:
"Yes, but doesn't it have a striking resemblance to a helicopter"
Jack:
"Well that is not possible"
Danielle:
"You've told me that a woman can't get pregnant here, but this looks like an old community that have lived on the island for ages. So what exactly is possible here, Jack"
They both look at the mural. The audience know that the picture is depicting the situation on the open field with Ron and Riley.
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Desmond is swimming up to the surface in scuba diver suit and sees a white helicopter on the beach. Someone is there and burying something or someone (the audience knows it is Riley's dead body).
Desmond swims to the beach and Ron points one of his guns at him. Des goes up from the water with his hands up.
Ron:
"Are you him?"
Desmond:
"What?"
Ron:
"Is your name Jack Shephard?"
Desmond:
"No, my name is Desmond David Hume"
Ron mumbles Desmond like he has heard the name before.
Ron:
"Do I know you?"
Desmond:
"I don't think so. Who are you and who are you burying?"
Ron had completely forgotten about Riley. His head was covered with a bag so Desmond did not see his face. He lowered the gun.
Ron:
"My name is Ron and this was my friend Riley. He got a heart attack on the helicopter while we were heading here"
Desmond:
"I'm sorry 'bout that. Are you from the freighter?"
Ron:
"Yes. I am from the DHARMA Initiative Hanso Group. We have a periodic inspection here"
Desmond:
"I believe Kelvin have told me about that."
Ron:
"Kelvin?"
Desmond:
"My friend from a DHARMA station here. But he's dead, just like your friend"
Ron:
"I'm sorry. Will you help me with this. I think there is an extra shovel in the copter."
Des took of the scuba diver equipment and went in. He noticed all the guns back in the copter.
Desmond (shouting from inside the copter):
"What's up with the guns, brother"
Ron (from outside):
"Safety issues. Don't worry. We don't use them that often."
Des noticed a gun with some blood on it and got suspicious. Did Ron kill Riley. Des picks it up, but get knocked out from behind.
He ties him to a tree on the beach, it's getting dark and he picks up a satellite phone and says:
Ron:
"are you there Paul?"
Paul ( on the other line)
"Yeah, what is it"
Ron:
"You will not believe who I have here"
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Everybody sits near the radio tower. It's dark and people are tired. Some people are sleeping next to the tower and some people are sitting next to a campfire they've made.
Claire goes to Jack with Aaron
Claire:
"Jack?"
Jack:
"Yes, is everything allright?"
Claire:
"Shouldn't they be here now?"
Jack:
"Well, they're probably trying to find out the coordinates, getting a rescue team, preparing a helicopter. Don't worry they will be here soon"
Claire:
"Because we are all very tired and need some place to stay before they come"
Alex comes in and interupts:
"We can stay at the barracks"
Jack:
"What?"
Alex:
"The tired people. They can stay at the barracks, our village, because it's abandoned. I know the code for the sonic fence, so it's not going to be that hard. The helicopters can land safely there and pick us up."
Jack:
"No. I'm not letting you go out in the jungle in the dark."
Alex:
"But it's safe. Our people are heading to the Temple and the Cerberus system is..."
A loud sound, something like the Lockdown-sound, is heard out from a speaker on the radio tower. Everybody reacts and looks at the speaker. A male voice is heard.
Male voice:
"This is a message from the DHARMA Initiative Hanso Group to all members left of the DHARMA Initiative. We have discovered that some stations are destroyed and we are going to have an inspection here, but first, all members proceed to a safe station and lock all doors. The hostiles on the island have ruined our experiments. For those who are unaware about this, in December 1987 they managed to kill several DHARMA Initiative members who stayed in the barracks. We were unaware that there were DHARMA Initiative members left and proceeded their experiments. Don't worry, your replacements will come now. We thank you for your very long job here and we are sorry for not contacting. But this is important. Every member has to either stay at the barracks or stay at your post. Do not let the hostiles come inside. In approximately two hours we will turn on the Cerberus system that will destroy every single human life on the island. Every single hostile will be killed and every DHARMA Initiative member will get a replacement. I repeat: Every member has to either stay at the barracks or stay at their post. In approximately two hours we will turn on the Cerberus system that will destroy every single human life on the island.
This message is repeated but we see Jack looking at Alex.
Jack:
"The Cerberus system. That is the black smoke right?"
Alex:
"Yes. I can take your people to the barracks in just one and a half hour."
Jack:
"What about the fence. You have the code"
Alex:
"Yes. We're gonna make it through. The village is safe"
Jack turns and sees the scared faces to the whole camp.
Jack
"Listen everybody. The thing in the jungle everybody calls the monster is back. Alex will take all of you to the village they stayed at. It's abandoned and it is safe. You all have to listen to her because it is a dangerous sonic fence she has to turn off. The Cerberus system will be turned on in two hours so you have to move fast."
Sun:
"What about the rescue?"
Jack:
"Since the male voice said we could stay at our stations, I'm going to stay here, inside the radio tower. I will hear if the helicopter shows up."
Kate:
"What about the ones on the beach. They don't know about this"
Jack gets the walkie-talkie he attached to his belt.
Jack:
"Hurley. Are you there"
We see the people on the beach around a fire and having a good time.
Hurley:
"Yes, I'm here Jack"
Jack:
"You all have to go to the nearest DHARMA station and hide inside there. The DHARMA Initiative are going to get the monster, the security system, to kill everybody outside a station. You got that?"
Hurley looks at Sayid and the rest and wonders.
Hurley:
"Are you serious?"
Jack:
"Hurley. We all heard it on a speker here on the radio tower. You have to get everybody in to the nearest station. In two hours the monster will kill everyone. This is very important. Okay."
Hurley turns it off and looks at Sayid.
Sayid:
"What is it?"
Hurley:
"We have a problem"
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Ron made a campfire near the cable. Desmond is awake and realizes he is tied up.
Desmond:
"What are you doing to me?"
Ron:
"I'm following an order. You probably know about orders don't you?"
Desmond:
"You're Naomi's people. She had a picture of me and my girlfriend. How do you know about us?"
Ron:
"We know about you through the person who are giving these orders"
Desmond:
"It's her father right! Charles Widmore?"
Ron:
"He is involved, but it's not Mr. Widmore who are giving the orders."
Desmond:
"Who is is then?"
Ron:
"I'm not allowed to say that."
Desmond:
"Can't ya give me some answers damnit! Why are you doing this to me..."
Ron:
"I want answers from you!"
Desmond:
"What! What do you wanna know. In three years I've been stranded here and pushing a button. What more do you wanna know."
Ron:
"Everything. How was it that you crashed here. And tell me about your friend Kelvin. i wanna know everything about your relationship with The DHARMA Initiative"
Desmond:
"I was never a member aight! Tell me the truth. Are you DHARMA?"
Ron:
"Yes, I am. But that doesn't matter now."
Ron stands up.
Desmond:
"Where are you going, brother?"
Ron:
"I'm taking you to the helicopter and we are moving to the man with Naomi's satellite phone"
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The beach people are arguing about their next move
Sayid:
"You said we only have two hours?"
Hurley:
"Yes, but what about Desmond and Charlie. They have been there too long"
Sawyer:
"what are we gonna do? Stay here and wait for'em"
Sayid:
"We can't go after them. It's too far to the cable."
Jin:
"We use van"
Hurley:
"Yes, I can take the van and drive to the cable! That's much faster"
Sawyer:
"Unless you've forgot. Their station is underwater so your DHARMA-mobile won't help ya"
Hurley:
"Well, we can't leave them to die"
Sayid:
"They may be dead already"
Hurley:
"Don't say that."
Sayid:
"I'm sorry Hurley, but we can't risk it. We have to move to The Pearl now."
Bernard stands up.
Bernard:
"Well, if the Pearl isn't that far, let's just wait here for an hour or more and then take the van to the Pearl."
Sayid:
"Good idea. It's going to be 15 minutes drive to the Pearl. We wait here, but Hurley..."
He looks at Hurley
Sayid:
"We leave if they don't show up"
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Inside the radio tower is Jack sitting alone with Ben tied up. Nobody is outside. Everybody has left.
Ben:
"Jack. I don't understand why you are still holding on to me. I thought you would kill me."
Jack:
"You said you were born on this island"
Ben:
"Yes"
Jack:
"Well, I don't understand this pregnancy thing you guys have been going on with. How could a civilization, men and women, be living in peace right on this island if a pregnant woman can't have birth"
Ben:
"It's complicated, Jack. Only the ones that conceive the baby on the island die, not the people who come to the island as pregnant. How do you know about the civilization?"
Jack:
"Can't you tell me a little about that?"
Ben:
"The old civilization holds greater power than you can imagine. You can't see it because you are not on the list"
Jack:
"What list?"
Ben:
"Jacob's list."
Jack:
"Ah, the great leader nobody has seen right? You told me about Jacob after I finished your surgery. You told me that you are the only one who listens to Jacob"
Ben:
"That is the truth! The list contains the people who are ready. Ready to communicate with the island. This island contains a powerful force"
Jack:
"I don't believe you. I don't think there is a Jacob. I believe every unusual thing here is created by the DHARMA Initiative. I don't think there is a magic force behind this"
Ben:
"That is what I'm saying to you. You are not ready. The civilization contains an enourmous force. They are the island's history"
walkie talkie:
"Jack, are you there"
Jack goes out of the radio tower to get a better signal.
Jack:
"Sayid?"
Sayid:
"Jack. We are soon heading to the Pearl, but we have a problem. Desmond and Charlie are not back yet"
Jack:
"What?"
Sayid:
"I believe something has happened to them. We will drive to the Pearl with the DHARMA-van, but I'm going after them"
Jack:
"Sayid, We can't risk it"
But something happens. We can't hear Sayid anymore. The camera pans at Sayid. He's looking at the ocean. The others are looking there too.
Sayid: (to Jack)
"Someone is coming with a helicopter. Just have the walkie on. I'll talk to you later"
Hurley:
"Is it the rescue?"
Sayid:
"Possibly. But prepare yourself. Grab the guns and don't do anything stupid"
The helicopter lands safely on the sand. An african-american man gets out. He wears a DHARMA-jumpsuit and look surprised.
The afro-american man:
"Didn't you hear the message. You should be inside a station right now."
Sayid has a gun pointed at him but lowers it.
Sayid:
"We were going to right now."
Jack interupts on the walkie.
Jack
"Sayid. A helicopter is landing here on the field."
Sayid:
"I know Jack. A helicopter has landed here too"
The camera is back at Jack. He is standing right outside the tower. A Man goes out of the helicopter and yells.
Ron:
"Don't worry. Everything is fine"
He turns of the helicopter and walk safely to Jack. The camera is at Desmond who is tied up back in the helicopter and tries to get himself loose with the things he finds in there.
Jack:
"It's OK. I think he is one of the people who landed on the beach"
Sayid:
"Ok. I think they've sent more helicopter to the inspection"
The afro-american man hears this and starts to wonder what he is talking about.
Afro-american man:
"Excuse me
Sayid:
"What is it?"
Afro-american man:
"I heard you say something about more helicopters."
Sayid:
"Yes. One of our friends have spotted one too"
Sayid is getting suspicious and grabs the gun again.
Afro-american man:
"No no. You don't need the gun, but the thing is that we haven't send anymore helicopters. The rest of the DHARMA-crew will come here in an hour with boats"
Sayid:
"Boats?"
Afro-american man:
"Yes. We haven't send anymore helicopters"
Sayid frantically goes back to the walkie-talkie.
Sayid:
"Jack! Listen. Get inside the tower. I don't think you should trust the people in the helicopter."
Jack (on the other line):
"Nothing to worry about. "
But then the camera goes to Jack. He is being held by gunpoint by Ron. Jack looks scared and is forced to say things to Sayid.
Ron:
"Now say that you have taken care of it."
Jack:
"I've taken care of it, Sayid"
Ron:
"Good. Now turn of the walkie"
Surprisingly we hear Desmond say:
"Not that fast!"
Ron:
"How did you get out?"
Desmond has found a gun and is holding it to his face.
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